lays her heart
most intimately
before you,
softness
a gift,
this blush on her form,
a part of who she is
but when you touch her
the perfection becomes yours
lays her heart
most intimately
before you,
softness
a gift,
this blush on her form,
a part of who she is
but when you touch her
the perfection becomes yours
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
From a generous soul.
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Thankful you see one, Ben
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But I do.
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🙂
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Love grows from this moment – so very glad for you, Audrey.
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I suspect that it does, Shari.
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loved it..
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I appreciate you reading.
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I love this one, Audrey! ❤️
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Thank you, Ms. Betty ♡
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Oh, my. This is absolutely lovely on so many levels, Audrey. Very poetic!!
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I was hoping it sounded intriguing, Debbie. Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you
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Beautiful, Audrey, absolutely beautiful…and that final line to die for!
Much love
jf
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I’m thrilled you approve, jf.
*smiling so much*
Hugs
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beautiful!
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Penny, thanks so much
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Gorgeous
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So good to see you, Mr. Cake
Thank you
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Well I still want to edit your flower poems Ms Dawn
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I’d be honored if you would help me decide on which to use. Your editing would be a welcomed journey. Your opinion means a lot.
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OK…send me over a good selection and I will be happy to appraise, edit and select
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Thank you, Sir
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No problem…can I send you a link to my latest poem?
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Yes, please. You know I want to read it.
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https://cakeordeathsite.wordpress.com/2018/05/10/the-truth-of-the-matter/
Let me know what you think.
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Looking forward to reading. I’ll let you know, of course.
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The perfection becomes yours. Lovely
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Thank you, John
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