Exquisite Moment


Our distance disguised as intriguing
Whispers to me of fate’s cruelties
What will come of this meeting
Overwhelmed with curiosity
Wherever you are tonight
I wish to be there, too

Lost in exquisite surroundings
Stopping to admire this powerful view
An alluring disaster such as this
Can easily be related to, understood
Fate’s sensual act unfolding before me
Rain tending to the sun beautifully

Through soft, yet dark, cloud pillows
Curtains of rain will wash the sun
Sun submitting to the rain’s shower
A risk, plentiful if carefully tended to
This moment locked sublimely away
Will include wishing thoughts of you


36 thoughts on “Exquisite Moment

  1. The thought and dreamy images of this poem is so cool, the line: “Fate’s sensual act unfolding before me…” is that perfect quest of yuan-fen that life creates, always pushing us forth to see just what lies around the corner πŸ™‚ Really enjoyed this poem.


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