Our distance disguised as intriguing
Whispers to me of fate’s cruelties
What will come of this meeting
Overwhelmed with curiosity
Wherever you are tonight
I wish to be there, too
Lost in exquisite surroundings
Stopping to admire this powerful view
An alluring disaster such as this
Can easily be related to, understood
Fate’s sensual act unfolding before me
Rain tending to the sun beautifully
Through soft, yet dark, cloud pillows
Curtains of rain will wash the sun
Sun submitting to the rain’s shower
A risk, plentiful if carefully tended to
This moment locked sublimely away
Will include wishing thoughts of you
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
The thought and dreamy images of this poem is so cool, the line: “Fate’s sensual act unfolding before me…” is that perfect quest of yuan-fen that life creates, always pushing us forth to see just what lies around the corner 🙂 Really enjoyed this poem.
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You make me smile over and over again. Not sure how you do it, but don’t stop. I’m so glad those words spoke to you, Dalo. Yuan-fen is proving to be a huge delight in my life. It brought me these wonderful comments from you. Thank you.
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I kind of like the idea of being able to watch and react to life unfolding in front of me without too much concern or worry about what to do. Waiting for that exquisite moment. 🙂
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Me, too. 🙂
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I love this so beautifully crafted . bravo! Excellent
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Aw, that means a lot. I loved writing this one. Took me too long to write. Couldn’t figure out how to sort my mind. Thank you, Willow! xxx
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Aha! The meeting is always the scary part, too, huh?
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For sure, but I probably won’t ever have to worry about it.
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Why not?
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Seems highly impossible, I think. 😦
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But why?
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I don’t know…seems like a dream, probably.
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Dreams are the greatest of things, and dreams do come true.
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They probably do for Warriors like you.
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And for warriors like you, Audith.
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Naw, mostly not.
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Beautifully woven! 🙂 Thank you for sharing this!
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Hi, Mark. Great to see you here! Thank you so much. 🙂 This was an awsome moment.
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I sense a needed cleansing here, Aud. Very freeing. Nice.
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A perfect sunset, Chum. The moment found these few words, which apparently have been rolling around in my mind a lot the last few days. Thank you.
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So positive. Congrats! 🙂
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Hi, Salva. I think this is positive, in the end, that is… Thank you. 🙂
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😀 😀 😀
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🙂
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Pressed the reply too soon. I wanted to say how beautiful your poem is.
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Thank you, my friend. 🙂
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🙂 xxx
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Love or affection across the mile, the sun the moon can be viewed from different locations bringing hearts and souls together. Xxx
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Your words are far more poetic than mine, Willow. xxx You’ve sorted my mind wonderfully. Thank you 🙂
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And…..breathe. Beautiful 🙂
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Smiles. Hey, Sleepy. Thank you.
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I’m wiiiiiddddeeee awake
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And hollering. ….. or stuttering…..
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Both
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Oh, this is so very very beautiful!! 🙂
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Thank you, Line! I’m glad it came across well. Yay. 🙂
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