
Our minds are consumed
with a legion of details.
Where to begin deemed
obvious by most,
if you could feel the pulse;
a quickened heartbeat,
you’d know there’s no recovery.
We’re past all that,
bits too forgone to consider,
the beauty lies, quite perfectly
just beyond
and your hands belong there.
Hello dear Audrey. I loved your work today.
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Hello, John. Thank you so much for stopping by and reading. You’ve been a busy man. Happy Father’s Day.
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You are welcome my dear friend.
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An enjoyable read, thoughtful with an enigmatic longing. Well done. 🧡
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I’m so happy you enjoyed this poem, Steve. ‘Tis like you see through me. I appreciate your talented eye.
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I’m embarrassed. 😳 It’s just what I read, everyone is different.
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No, it was good. Promise.
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Hands and beauty always belong together. Well done Audrey
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Yes, indeed, John. Thank you always.
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This is such an interesting combination, Audrey. You’re making me think. Well done.
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Oh, I hope by now you’ve recovered and just chalked it up to Audrey just taking liberties yet again. I do get ahead of myself sometimes. Hope you are well, Dan.
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Hello, hello, Hello! You have been in hiding!
Superb bit of writing!
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Indian Cowboy, you seem chipper. So good to see you again!
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Yeah… It’s been a long, long time!
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Surely has. I pray you are well.
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So far, so good. My country though, is not in good shape. Too much hate. Too much division
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Much as it is here in America, my friend. I will be praying for India.
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