not a minute shall return
what’s been said, taken
i’m lost between
whatever
and
i’m sorry,
maybe even,
you hurt me.
not a minute shall return
what’s been said, taken
i’m lost between
whatever
and
i’m sorry,
maybe even,
you hurt me.
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
Not a worse feeling than being “lost between” ~ and then having the courage to say sorry and move forward. Great poem, great feeling of what life brings.
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There lives a lot of confusion inside those lost walls. I’m thankful to read one has the courage to move forward, because that’s just what it takes, Dalo. Thanks for reading along. I appreciate you. xo
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Disagreements between siblings are just awful, aren’t they? They really know how to push our buttons (and we, theirs). Hang in there, Ms. Bold One!!
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Disagreements in general have never been my strong point. I tend to clam up. Work to be done there, for sure. Day by day.
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There is pain in this poem, and you expressed it poignantly. The space between the pain and the acceptance – that’s where healing begins.
I’m always glad to read a poem and see a photo of yours. Hope you are doing well, Audrey.
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Yes, there is and the pain is deeper than these few words, but I believe I did what I came here to do and that was to express what I often times cannot utter when left on my own. Thank you for reading along, Shari. This was your idea for me…this A to Z. Hugs.
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Nice!! Have a nice day dear Audrey
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Thank you, Niko. You’re very sweet, you know. Hugs!
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Thanks my dear 🙂
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I love the way you shifted font size for the Lost Between line. Such a powerful visual cue. The honesty of this one says it all. Bold…and Bravo!
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That was divine interference, my dear. Works for sure! The honesty I should allow to stream more naturally, instead of keeping my mouth shut for fear of hurting someone close to me with my boldness. Thanks!
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Honesty spoken in love is always beautiful…
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Very true, Morgan. Thank you for the reminder.
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Loved the lost between ‘whatever’ and ‘I’m sorry.’
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This was written after an argument with my sister. She the catalyst for whatever else was bothering me at the time. Works for many situations, I believe. So glad you understood my thinking there, Butch.
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I did.
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Life experience must feel great most of the time.
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Most of the time.:-)
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🙂
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Truth or fantasy, Audrey? Either way beautifully written!!!! ❤
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Truth, Amy. My A to Z was written around my truths. So glad to have reached you with this one. Hugs!
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Then ….. BIG (((HUGS))) ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you ♡
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