I love that prickly feeling,
I feel down my back,
When I sense you nearby.
Goosebumps,
Release across my freckling,
Confirming it’s you in my mirror.
Behind me
Nudging
Whispering
Smiling
Damn, why are you such a tease?
Such mystery and fun all within this poem ~ a review mirror reflecting nature playing around with you… And what brought a smile to my face was the “Release across my freckling” ~ a perfect line π
Yes, he was, kinda. I like playful. This is me most of the time, Gus. I just don’t find her as often when I write, but she shows up once and a while. Glad you enjoyed this one. Hope it made you laugh. π
Me too…
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Such mystery and fun all within this poem ~ a review mirror reflecting nature playing around with you… And what brought a smile to my face was the “Release across my freckling” ~ a perfect line π
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Haha. I think that was you behind me, Dalo. π I’m really glad you liked that line. Giggle. Thank you…
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There? Not there? Really. Not really. Great look back, Aud.
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Oh there, usually, on que. Ha. Thank you, Chum.
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I love the shot! Goodness…who do you see, Audith?
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Thanks, I was bored in traffic, Duketh. Not sure, seems to be sorta elusive, I think. *smiles*
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Maybe a water snake.
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Obviously not!
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Tis!
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You are such a brat!
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Looks like the truck is tailgating behind you? A playful poem, and I like that you mentioned in the comments that it was fun to write. π
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Yes, he was, kinda. I like playful. This is me most of the time, Gus. I just don’t find her as often when I write, but she shows up once and a while. Glad you enjoyed this one. Hope it made you laugh. π
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Cute and playful.
π
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What I was going for, Staci. Almost the weekend!! π
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Great. HOpe you had a good weekend.
π
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Nice work π
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Thank you, Benjamin π
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You’re welcome. Have a beautiful night!
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You, too. Hope yours is going well.
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i really enjoyed this; good one, Audrey!
My best to you
john
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Thank you, John π I hope it made you laugh. My best to you, as well.
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You’ve got somebody under your skin.
Leslie
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Maybe, maybe not. But it was a fun poem to write, Leslie.
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Fun to read too.
Leslie
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Giggle. Thanks…
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You’re welcome.
Leslie
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π
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