Devoted Missive

might we always
connect upon
the best of a hickory branch.
touch with the ease,
of leaves to a gentle breeze,
and focus on the depths
within each.
for my intense reaction
speaks
to you
and you love how it looks
on me.

16 thoughts on “Devoted Missive”

I love the way this dances on the tongue…it’s fluid.. and the content is very sincere and stripped.

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Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister says:

October 19, 2016 at 9:20 pm

Thank you for the compliment, Anthony. I’m happy the poem came across okay. I’ve been known to say a lot with few words. Exactly how I am in person, as well.

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To focus on the depths within each – that’s how a sound relationship is built. Well written, Audrey.

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Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister says:

October 16, 2016 at 9:23 pm

Thank you, my wise friend. I don’t see anything wrong with wanting to know someone completely and to be known throughly. Hope your weekend was well. ♡

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Ooh, this one is lovely — so open and honest. I really admire that in you, my friend!

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Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister says:

October 16, 2016 at 9:21 pm

I like reading poetry of mine where I write with confidence. Shows where my head was at the time the words came to me. Thanks so much, Debbie.

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