Identity

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Warm
Wrapped blanket
Salty surge
Forgotten spindrift
Sparkles
Listen, for a clash
Of each traveling wave
Allowing submersion
Inside understanding
An opportunity to contemplate
Yet, still feel you near

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47 thoughts on “Identity

  1. I love the use and nouns and adjectives here and mostly in the first verses… I think you have achieved a wonderful poetic effect in a sort of concise and minimalist way!~ Congrats (once again) Aquileana πŸ˜€

  2. So beautiful! I love being near the water (but not so much being on it, ha!) Your picture looks like it was taken on a cold day — guess that blanket helped?!

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