Lay
Our melodic ears
Towards cusping water
Allow
Curious eyes to chase
Clouds in a crystalline sky
Force
Our zealous hands
Into pillows
Relax
Lay
Our melodic ears
Towards cusping water
Allow
Curious eyes to chase
Clouds in a crystalline sky
Force
Our zealous hands
Into pillows
Relax
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
Ah, this is so perfect… I am ready for a great nights sleep after hearing/reading these words. Wonderful.
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*sigh* Is this your way of keeping me from running into your arms and offering you a big hug for your return? Having me find you sound asleep, Dalo? So as not to wake you…I shall fight the urge to lay beside you for a nap, and tip toe out quietly. Thank you…
Just know I will not be as kind next time, Sir.
Sweetest of dreams, Randall. (Welcome home)
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Ha, ha ~ had a great sleep, thanks for being quiet 🙂
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You’re welcome, Dalo. ♡
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Very very good. Love the opening. Love the ending.
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Hey, Ben. I wasn’t expecting you again so soon. A nice surprise. Thank you. You know, I value your opinion and am quite lucky to have your trained eye on my words. Hope you’re enjoying your night.
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Lovely and relaxing 🙂
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Hey there, Neha! Thanks…
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Hey back hope all is alright 🙂
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I haven’t seen the word ‘cusp’ in years (how useful, thanks) and it fills its purpose here perfectly but the word ‘melodic’ defines the entire piece. A perfectly assembled structure of requiescence and lassitude Audrey Dawn 🙂
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I look forward to your poetic comments, Michael McGuire. Quite the feeling to know that you find my words melodic. I’m such a fan of your ability. I could read you for hours. Thank you, always.
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What about a swim?
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I’ve got you wanting to swim again?! Yes! Admit it. I’m rubbing off on you, Duke.
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Yes, you must be. I’ll just float on a boat or raft.
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What if there is an emergency? Room enough for me, too?
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We can search for a MT like boat.
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Before going swimming? Could take a while. Where would we look?
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In the bay, probably.
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We’ll need scuba gear to look there, you know.
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No! I can’t do that sort of thing!
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Me either…we’re sunk. I’ll get us a boat another way. *puts on her ski mask*
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I hope it’s black and evil looking.
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Hey…I need you to be sweet about it, Duke.
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This is great Audrey. I like the idea of being forced to relax.
🙂
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Sometimes we have to, Sraci. Thank you 🙂
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Your welcome. Oh yes, it’s true.
🙂
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Thanks… ♡
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Ahhhh … to relax and watch the clouds and listen to the water. Thank you for this relaxing break 🙂
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Yes. Sounds perfect, huh? Let’s go, Gus. 🙂 You’re welcome.
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It is time to gaze and relax, Aud. Or get ready for Christmas. I can’t decide. 🙂
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Sit still, You! 🙂
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Everyone is so stressed right now. There is so much to do, work deadlines before the holidays, school events, plus all of the holiday preparations. We all need pillows and some relaxation. Thank you for writing
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I know, I feel it, as well. Pushing from one event to the next with robotic movements. Family visiting from out of town this weekend feels like a blessing, yet a rushed curse in the same breath. Yes, we do. Relax, Sir. Enjoy your weekend. Thank you for your time. xx
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I love this one! Every beautiful word of it. 🙂
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Awwww! ! *blush* Thank you, Victor. You made my day!
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Haha. I’m glad!
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🙂 Yay! Enjoy your weekend!
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I will! You, too. 🙂
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Okay, for you I shall try. 🙂
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Ha! You’d better. 😉
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*Giggle* Okay…
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