Just Right

I watched the sun set tonight. She is such a beauty sliding behind the cedars.
Favorite game – hide and seek.
Her curve seems to hug “just right”around the tips, and well, I guess I’ve always thought so…
A small smile turned up around my cheeks, a flushing of pink appeared,
and then I thanked her for rising this morning.
As if to wink, she paused and then moved on, as one should, I suppose.

13 thoughts on “Just Right

  1. Beautiful writing, beautiful words, Aud. I’ve been fortunate to have sun and warm weather for all of the autumn, but since my return to Czech this past week – and the cold/wind/rain, how I miss the sun already. πŸ™‚ Your last line is beautifully perfect to fit my mood – this is just the way it should be… “As if to wink, she paused and then moved on, as one should, I suppose.”

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    • Dearest Mr. Collis, we’ve had the warmest of Novembers up until this morning. I woke to rain as I got ready for church. And it’s still raining nearly 8 hours later. Oh, how we needed the rain. Nebraska is so dry. Thank you for bringing a smile to my face this afternoon. Glad you are safe and where you need to be for the foreseeable future. No sun makes for a cozy day indoors. Put on a little Randy Travis, maybe, and do a little dreaming. Many hugs to you, My Photographer Philosopher Extraordinaire. Stay warm β™‘

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