Skies of you
Manifesting wild
Hues of the prairie
Blowing through me
Desires running across
Time and my soul’s mind
I’ve decided to become lost
Inside colorful earthly patches
And thoughts of the wind blowing
Bringing me closer to musical tones
Your spirit proving to be my composer
Beautiful opening.
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Thanks so much, Benjamin
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Welcome.
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Prairie thoughts of hue, Aud.
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Yes, Chum. Thanks for stopping by hope all is well…
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Busy day yesterday, Aud. I hope your home trip is giving you what you need.
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We’ve been catching up and enjoying the chance to be in the same space. Loads of plans ahead, as well. Thanks for asking, Chum.
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Love the way this one reads ( I read poetry out loud) and the visual construction.
Vacation does you well, you do it proud.
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Thank you, Shari. (Me too) I happened upon the construction half way through and went with it. The last line the toughest to nail down. I’m having a great visit. I’m glad it shows. β₯
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I especially love your last line π Perfection, Friend π
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I had to think on that line a minute, Morgan. I’m glad I did. π Thank you…!! π
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Seems, as if vacation brings out the very best of you!!
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Hi, Salva. I am hoping it does, actually. Thanks! π
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Oh wow, isn’t that beautiful!
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Thanks, Starr. Just some of the pretty Nebraska prairie grass.
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Hope you’re not near the tornado results…
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About an hour away…its been a sketchy few days. We’re okay.
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Oh thank God–so frightening.
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Yes, this is summer in Nebraska.
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Thanks for asking, Starr!
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Very nice. Sounds like a wonderful timeβ¦and freedom!
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Thanks, yes, like breathing the cleanest of air. Freedom…yeah.
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This is so so very beautiful!!! π
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Thank you, Line
You inspire me with your positivity! ! π
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and you inspire me with your lovely poetry!! π β€
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Thank you β₯
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This is really lovely! π
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Victor…I’m so pleased to hear from you! I’m sitting back quite happy to have finally caught your attention. Kidding aside, I’m thankful for your comment and thrilled you liked this poem. ~ Audrey π
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Ha! I must apologize for not being very attentive to other people’s poetry. I’m trying to take the time to read it more, because I know I’ve been missing out. You’re a wonderful writer! Looking forward to your future posts. π
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Oh, no no no…please no need to apologize. I completely understand about only having so much time. I was just poking at you a bit and trying to get a smile. I have enjoyed your poetry so much, Victor. Very sweet of you and honestly never any pressure to stop by. I’m a bit of a joker amongst all this serious sounding poetry. π
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Haha. Well you succeeded in making me smile. π I do want to read more of your work, though! You’re great!
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You smiling has completed my day’s work then, Victor. π Thank you, my dear. Please enjoy reading and I will try to avoid feeling as if I’ve pressured you into it. See this is when I get myself into trouble… haha. Have a great day!!
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Haha. Don’t feel that way! I started reading because I happened upon the poem you posted today, and became curious about your past writings. Thanks! You, too! π
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Well your admission makes me feel better!! Thank you for that.. π
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