Lay with me under the setting sun
Watch the clouds roll into the horizon
Allow your arms to hold me tight
Get lost in these hazel eyes
Run your fingers through my curls
Whisper of love slowly for me, your girl
We’ll enjoy love’s hues of ocean blue
While I consume every scent of you
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
Oh dear it’s a romance poem! Were there any sharks?
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Yes, I like romantic poems, Duke. You should really try to like them, too. NO SHARKS! Maybe…he wore a fin on his back.
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Ooo, was he the shark?
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Haha! Do you think he could have been?
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You should have harpooned him. That would have told you one way or the other.
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There was no shark and no man to speak of about the boat, Duke.
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But I’m sure there was an adventure somewhere.
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Yes, and in my mind too, of course.
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Audrey, your poetry just keeps getting better and better. This one is gorgeous and sensual. I’m glad it’s out there – it will start being read at every wedding – well, at least on the wedding nights. And to pair it with Mr. McClellan’s poem – WOW!
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Thank you for noticing the work I’ve done. I’m glad you think it has improved. I’m trying. I enjoyed the image of this poem a lot. Michael’s contribution was a surprise and a perfect addition. He writes of love like no other. Honestly, it seems to come so natural for him. He’s worth following, Shari.
Wedding nights will never be the same now..how nice. 🙂
I appreciate your support. Lot’s on the stove right now. Hope your new story is going well…
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Lovely, spinning in the love:)
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Thank you, my dear. 🙂
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Awesome Audrey. Very romantic.
🙂
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Thank you, Staci.
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Oh My, Friday night romance!
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Wasn’t that a great treat. I’m still relishing in my glow. 🙂
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I’m nudging Mr Invisible….
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Tell him to wake up!! 😉
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Twice in one day…he takes a woman’s breath away.
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Lay with me forever under the moon and stars.
Watch the galaxies expand and contract
as you snuggle inside my atmosphere.
Get lost in the many layers of my love for you.
Hold my hands as they pause to enjoy
the silky caress of your hair through
my tremulous fingers combing their length.
Listen to my thoughts scream in
silent exultation of the treasure
I have found in the ocean blue of your eyes
while I inhale you into every part of my being.
M. Zane McClellan
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Michael, you are on a roll. Your poem has every woman sighing right now. This one, as well. I am impressed with your speed. You’ll be in loads of trouble if I start responding to your poetry.
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I had a visit from Cupid today. Shot me twice.
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Well, I returned the favor. You wrote a beautiful poem, Michael.
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Muy dulce mi poetisa preciosa
😉
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Sus palabras son tan amorosa, Poeta
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Me siento muy honrado por tu alabanza graciosa.
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Que honor mis poemas con sus palabras.
Very sweet of you to respond in Spanish, Miguel. 🙂
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Enjoyed the exchange, my friend. Have a good evening & weekend. Peace.
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Yes enjoy yours, as well. Oh, and Michael, thank you.
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You’re quite welcome, Auddie.
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Love is in love tonight, Michael. ♡ Well done.
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