waiting for a songbird
greeting,
catching sun’s first rays.
to perch,
amongst winter’s white,
blanketing the gray.
emerald brilliant
reflecting her eyes,
beauty amongst overlay
almost feels right.
waiting for a songbird
greeting,
catching sun’s first rays.
to perch,
amongst winter’s white,
blanketing the gray.
emerald brilliant
reflecting her eyes,
beauty amongst overlay
almost feels right.
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
I notice the birds are starting their first mating rituals. Heralds of Spring. 🙂
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Here, too, Ben. I love the beginnings of their return.
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Me too. I love birds. So much easier to love than people somehow. Still I love a challenge too. 🙂
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Animals generally are easier to love and show their love easily.
I can’t handle a challenge. There was once a time. I feel like I fought too hard for too long. Now, I just want what’s meant to be.
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Best to “be like water”.
https://www.goodreads.com/quotes/29138-be-like-water-making-its-way-through-cracks-do-not
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Songbirds in the winter sound different. As if they are playing more of a solo-separate from the orchestra of summer.
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You know what? This morning I was sitting at my bar, as the house was quiet on that end, and I could hear a songbird outside my patio door. It was exactly that..a solo. Felt like it was only for me. I adored the moment.
Thank you for reading me…
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Oh, I do so love this, Ms. Red 💜😊
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Aw, thanks, Ms. Owl ♡
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My pleasure 😊
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She feels hidden in plan sight.
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And yet, in her own way, she sees the world.
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She is comfortable there but someone saw her beauty.
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…and so what happens now?
9 words that cause my head to spin. Thanks for that, C
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Most likely they pluck her up and put her on display for their viewing pleasure.
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As they wish. Your reply didn’t help the spinning, you know?
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So pretty, Poetess! You had me at “emerald,” you know!!
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Is it fair to say I’m saddened by the idea of not getting to use Emerald in my next poem. I’ve forgotten how exquisite a word it really is. Thank you so much, Debbie.
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What a beautiful piece of poetry this is, Audrey! It was a real bliss reading this. 🤗
Much love!
❤️❤️❤️
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Hey, thank you, my friend. It’s nice to hear from you. ♡
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My pleasure, Audrey! 🤗
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This is beautiful, Audrey.
It’s getting to the point in the year when I am “catching sun’s first rays” on my way to work. I hope to soon be hanging out by the river as the sun is rising.
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Dan, I appreciate you saying so. You know, by the river and the sun rising sounds just about perfect. I’m certain you’ll catch the best of sunsets. #envious
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The only thing I like about Daylight Saving Time is that I get to experience those sunrises twice each spring.
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I miss my opportunities to catch sunrises. I need to get going earlier. I used to be so good at that, but now I’ve figured out how to completely exhaust myself the day before… Helps to have a second driver in the family now, too. 🙂
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I remember the second driver. The immediate relief after schlepping them around for years was such s big change.
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So beautiful my friend 💜💜💜
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Thank you, my dear one. I hope your spirits are rising. I caught a glimpse of your post. I shall be over soon. ♡
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Thank you Audrey you are always most welcome 💜💜💜💜
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You’re so sweet, Willow ♡
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Thanks Sis ❤ ❤
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What a sensuous poem this is, Audrey.
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Ack – I meant to say that I adore the title – Emerald Rouse – it’s a glimpse into the heart of the poem, like the edge of the leaves peeking through the snow. Funny thing is, I first read the title too fast and thought it was Emerald Rose. When re-reading, I was taken by its subtle perfection.
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I’m not certain I placed my thoughts and punctuation right in this poem, Shari. My mindset wavered a bit. Glad you found an angle that worked for you. Your support means so much. Thank you for taking the time. ♡ Tis a glimpse.
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Yes, Ma’am, it is.
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Lovely Audrey. I’m fond of Emerald (and the color) as it is my birthstone.
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I’ve loved the color since I was a wee one, Butch. I chose an emerald stone in my class ring even though it wasn’t my birthstone. I find emerald to be a very attractive word. I’d like to use it again soon. Sorta obsessed with it now. Happy you liked it. 🙂
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It could be in the Audrey word museum (Like Verdant)
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I think you’re on to something, Butch. (Exactly)
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Ha ha ha.
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🙂
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So Beautiful 🙂 Sorry I haven’t been round much. A lot has been happening in ‘real life’ and I’ve not been rounding as I should…but I should because I miss your beautifully cryptic poetry 🙂
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Thank you, my dear friend. You know, I miss my cryptic poetey, too. And as of late it seems to be coming back, which I’m happy about if I’m being honest. Some might argue I’m hiding, but if they know me at all they know this is when I’m most available to dancing on a mountaintop. A calmer heart feels good.
I’m sorry life’s been at you as of late. I’m hoping your new and beautifully inspiring relationship is going well. I’ve been reading you…sure hope you’re feeling better. 🙂
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I am definitely feeling better thank you 🙂 Life has been good, Busy!!, but very good 🙂 I hope the same is true for you. Dance On my poetic friend! And twirl a time or two for me 🙂
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I like reading “very good”!! 🙂
Not nearly as good as you, but my days have smiles in them. Twirl? Oh my…
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Twirling on a mountain top like Julie Andrews lol 🙂
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Imagine…no don’t! ! 🤓😭
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LOL Too late!
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I feel your words of natures winter greetings, especially because, “beauty amongst overlay almost feels right”
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Aw, thanks, Ivor. Glad you enjoyed!
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