Sitting in a crowed coffee shop
Instrumental music plays
Gorgeous
Deepest notes, each one
Sound like you,
If you were a note,
Deepest faith,
Deepest devotion,
Deepest love,
One I could have seen
Relying on
And she must have thought so, too
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
Chances are… the song will end in a minor chord
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…you may be correct. Thank you for hearing me, My Traveler.
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Ah. Music:
https://bennaga.wordpress.com/2012/05/08/for-music/
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Yes. I do love your poetry. I learn from you.
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I am flattered. 🙂 Thank you.
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You’re welcome, Sir
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sounds pretty
good 🙂
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Thank you, my friend
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To be betrayed by the one you don’t know about and the one you love – ruins the music.
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Yes ♡
Thank you for reading me.
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I just tried commenting on your post today and it wouldn’t let me.
Just so you see it..
U books are tough. However, I just finished a book this year by the name of Uglies. It’s a dystopian post-apocalypse story about a young girl who cannot wait to turn 16 and become “pretty”. Basically a coming of age situation where life suddenly becomes amazing. The twist sets in when the young girl’s BF leaves the night before the change, which is a tough process. Anyway, my daughter wanted to read it, so I read it with her knowing many questions would arise. A good story and I’d recommend it to teenagers looking for a summer read.
I plan on picking up your selection, Shari. Sounds good. Once again, you’ve done a great job of explaining, contrary to your thought. 🙂
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Mysterious
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I can’t imagine how, Mr. Cake. Good evening… Seems pretty straight forward.
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Hmmm maybe so but you have hidden depths Ms Dawn
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Yes, this is truer than true, which is why you find yourself here. Hmm. Giggle
I think you enjoy a good puzzle of sorts, Mr. Cake.
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I do
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Maybe I’m just a simpleton and you’ve created for yourself your very own paradox, Sir.
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Please do not run yourself down. However I might have constructed a labyrinth. I do that on occasion, I am a complicated person.
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I was merely proposing the idea. You’ll find I have an enormous level of self esteem. I happen to like your complication. Very much.
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I am a tricky customer even to myself.
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Do you believe we’re all capable of believing that about ourselves? Sorting you comes with great pleasure, Mr. Cake.
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Thank you Ms Dawn
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Goodness. Let’s hope she thought that and wasn’t after the money. 🙂
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For his sake, I hope so, Butch.
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🙂 Only you would worry about his welfare.
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Which is ridiculous, I know. Stupid, really. It is within me to do so and I can’t shut that part of me off. 😙
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Nor should you as long as you feel good about who you are and don’t get hurt.
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I’m in no position to be hurt. The archives brought this poem to light. Felt nice to share it today. Thank you for sitting near. ♡
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“Deepest notes, each one
Sound like you”
Beautiful!!!
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Rob, thank you so much. You’ve been incredibly supportive of my poetry.
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