together
warmth of your hand
felt
our fingers weaving
now, one
connection of our eyes
lingering
my body
rising to accept
your lead
following you, slowly
arriving
admiring your shoulders
desire
beyond the doorway
of your bedroom
acceptance
what I look forward to,
the most
Now this seems to be a perfect Valentine’s Day poem ~ seductive, quickens the heart, and…boy, it sure is getting hot in here. Showing off your dangerous side here, I like it.
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*blush* Smiles so much… I have to get ready, you see. Valentine’s Day is quickly approaching and every poet will be expected to provide some sort of mood setter. I really like the way my words have you reacting, Randall. Come closer. π Dangerous side, indeed. “Honey, I’ve got moves you’ve never seen.” Someone said that once in a movie… thanks for letting me flirt with you, Dalo. xxx
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Ha, ha…yes, I would have to imagine that Valentine’s Day to a poet must be a mix of bliss and torture, and a chance to freely let the dangerous side out to enjoy the day! Wish you a good one Audrey!
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Dangerous side…me? Smirk. Probably. Same to you, Dalo!
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Steamy! I like it! β€
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Thank you, Heather! β‘ Enjoying your day, I hope. π
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Apart from commuting to London in rush hour, it was pretty good thanks. Hope yours was too β€
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I like how you’re moving the whole realm to getting what you want, Aud.
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Yeah, build it and he will come (show up), right? Ha. Bad baseball movie metaphor. ..but great movie and awesome line in the movie. Thank you, Chum.
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Home run, Red.
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Thanks π
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i like how you pare this down to essentials, Audrey, and how in turn the impact is heightened.
Subtle, worthwhile writing.
Big Hugs
jf
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Thanks, jf. Just felt right to express myself this way today. Much love. xx
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“Acceptance.” Yes, that’s a lovely final image for this one, Audrey! ‘Tis a beautiful gift for almost-Valentine’s Day, too.
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Yes, most important, I think. Thank you, Debbie. Kinda what I thought…time for poets to set the love mood. *brings in the low lighting* π
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Wow! This is an interest, I say. I bet Jane Austen would like it!
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I appreciate your positive feedback, Duke. Jane Austen? You’ve got the wrong girl. I’m not her, I don’t read her much and I don’t understand the joke.
*blank stare*
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*laughs* I was just shredded.
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*snarls her lip* Indeed. *locks the door*
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And I’ve been locked out! Hmm…
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*peaks through the curtain*
*draws an X in the fog of the windowpane*
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I’m going to have to break the door down!
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*makes an even bigger X and draws a heart around it*
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Now the heart might repel me.
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*figures as much* Laughs, too.
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