Discovery

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Anticipating success,
I’d bring you here,
Sit you down,
Then ask you to relax.
Calmly,
I’d teach,
Your hand,
How to be,
Near me.
Inhaling,
Slowly guiding,
Finger tips,
Towards the place,
I’ve needed,
You to respond to,
And grown tired of,
Waiting for…
Exhaling,
At your touch,
As your fingers,
Slowly weave,
With mine.
Sighing,
Allowing you,
To explore,
My warmth,
By finally,
Holding hands.

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34 thoughts on “Discovery

  1. Beautiful expression of emotions, Audrey. I believe I must sit with this one for quite some time if I am to fully understand the complete sagaciousness of this poem, both obvious and subtle, including the anomalous placement of commas. Brilliant writing! Thanks for inspiring me, just when I needed it the most. Have a beautiful weekend!

    • Why, thank you, Michael. You succeeded in making me smile and then laugh, you know. Happy to see you following along so well. I’m impressed. You’re very kind and your compliments make me blush. I appreciate it. I’m thankful to have inspired you. Hugs! πŸ™‚ Have a great weekend, as well.

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