Waiting
Waiting, for you
Waiting for you, to show
Waiting for you to show, me
Waiting for you to show me, the wind
Waiting for you to show me the wind…
Waiting
Waiting, for you
Waiting for you, to show
Waiting for you to show, me
Waiting for you to show me, the wind
Waiting for you to show me the wind…
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
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I remember this so well…
I adore your words, Poetess.
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Lovely poem.
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Thank you so much for saying so, and for the visit. 🙂
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Waiting for the last word of the poem. Heh. J/K. Like it. 🙂
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Pesky, You… Thanks! I know you prefer math… 😉
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Math was my guess for the next word, actually…
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Not money? LOL
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Yes, the suspense is in the wind, Aud. Good comeback.
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Yes, I feel it coming, Zak. I do. Thank you. ♡
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I like how this piece actually gives the sense of waiting throughout. That’s very clever of you.
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I tried… I’m thrilled you caught that, Benjamin. Thank you!! 🙂
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Yes, a really nice idea. You’re welcome!
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Thanks 🙂
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I like the way that flows on the page – nice job!
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Hi, Dan! Thank you…I appreciate you noticing. It worked out pretty well.
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Beautiful, Aud 🙂
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Thank you, Sleepy 🙂 So show me already…
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That was ages ago now!! What am I showing you?
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The wind, my Memory Lossed Wonder
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I can’t show you it but I can take you where there’s lots of it.
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Okay…where?
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Top of the Alps
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….Alps…. 😦
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Where then???? Grrr
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Somewhere higher…
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That is higher
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Start climbing…handing you the backpack.
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Ok
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🙂
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Marvelous Form!!! 🙂 I Love it 🙂
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Thank you, Morgan! 🙂 Far too sweet, Madam. ♡
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makes me want to write one 😉
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Please, do! I’d love that… 🙂 🙂
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😉 OK 🙂
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Yay! 🙂
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Superb, Oh Queen!
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Thank you, Indian Cowboy. 😉
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