Whirls of adored simplicity
A delicacy in abounding view
Stretching her immaculate petals
A life of extravagance is her dream
Burdened to sway within these leaves
Predestined, but she agrees to glow
Allowing her white curves to show
Slender dancing limbs persuade
Pristine color an earthly fate
As we all watch intently
Indulging in her glow
Beautifully discriptive writing!
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Thank you, Willow! xxx
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Is Simplicity the name of the flower? It’s very unusual, pretty.
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No, she’s a type of Magnolia flower before she’s opened up her petals, Starr. Very innocent at this stage…I think she’s pretty, too.
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Well done! I assume you are putting together an ebook of these poems?
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🙂 Do you own xray glasses? I’m working on something very much like that, actually. Any hints for me? Thank you, Jacqui.
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Thank You for Being a Blessing in my Life, Audrey. I Appreciate YOU 🙂
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Well, thanks for making me blush, Morgan. You are a blessing. A wonderful Poetess!!! xxx
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🙂
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Very nice. Does she have a greenish/yellow flower in the middle?
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Thank you, Duke. I think she does, actually. You have a way of capturing all of her beauty. I missed that…dang it! (Dang, because I know you like that word. *smiles*)
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*laughing* I do like that. See, I would have plucked the middle out.
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*shocked eyes* I hope she didn’t hear you say that, Duke!
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Well, she should now I”m a wicked beast.
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Goodness! She may be scared of you.
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Audrey, I love your series of poems based on some lovely photos of flowers. You always have a way of bringing to life the qualities of the flowers shown – and sometimes you even disclose a few qualities I wouldn’t have picked up without your poetic sensibilities pointing them out for me.
I have gotten a bit behind this week and need to go back and look at some things you’ve posted that I’ve missed. That will be time happily spent. ❤
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Thank you, Kate. Now, I’m blushing. You humble me with your words of encouragement. It is a bit like fiction writing, actually. I just look at these flowers and wonder what they’d be like as women.
You know you are always welcome to have a visit. Coffee? Never feel obligated however, okay? I feel your support!! Hugs to you and have a fantastic day! xxxxxx + xxx 🙂
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Okay, coffee visit is on order! 🙂
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🙂
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She’s got it. She flaunts it. She dances to the breeze. Audrey captures the essence of her beauty.
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She’s a pretty little flower, and I hope I’ve captured what I feel she would have wanted to say, Mark.
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You gave her a voice in the world, Audrey.
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I tried, Mark. Glad you enjoyed it.
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