Beyond time there is forever
I’ve been exclusively drawn
Past our realities we’ve been chased
Address: water dreams
No permanent place
White sails our home
Crystal clear memories to come
Lost lives we’ll count them,
One by one
Doing life without you, not an option
You’ve won
Follow me into forever
Each amorous night beginning,
with devouring our setting sun
Nothing but blue ahead of us
Leave the green behind
Teach me the sea’s sweet melody
Only symbolic option I can find
Nourishing waters will feed
Your Pisces, me
Poseidon will greet us,
Just beyond the horizon
The logic behind our fate
I was his
Now I’m yours
Dreamlike state
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“teach me the sea’s sweet melody…” such a lyrical line, what beautiful imagery throughout the piece…simply wonderful! 🙂
Thank you so much. I appreciate you commenting on this one…you are very kind. 🙂
You’re very welcome, it was great piece ❤
Thank you 🙂
Another peaceful one, Audith. I like it! But we must wonder if Poseidon is nice.
Thank you, Duketh! What is to wonder about…he is nice.
Not as nice as Helios.
*starts chanting for a debate* *Cheers, oh boy!!*
I think we may have had speaks about this before.
*snaps her fingers* Dang it! His memory shows up for this of all things?!!
Haha! (laughed victoriously) I knew it! Isn’t this something? I think in the end, you agreed with me.
Fiddlesticks… Tis something, Duketh. Yeah, well let’s call it kinda sorta, I did.
And I think I agreed with me.
*yeah yeah yeah* *throws a water balloon at you*
*falls down* Ya got me!
*cries* She doesn’t know her own strength…water everywhere.
*laughing*
*smiles*
Nourished my soul, this one did, Audrey. Sweet.
Hey, Mark! Thanks a lot. Just seeing this sailboat yesterday helped nourish my soul. A million poems came to mind.
I envision you creating in a rush of inspiration, Audrey. It’s a nice thought.
Yeah, I suppose I was, actually. It isn’t easy sometimes thoughts get past me before I can get them down. Then I find myself annoyed. What if those words were the ones that should have been written…life of a poet. Yeah, I think it is, too. Just toss it all in, ya know.
You have a unique way. Keep it up. I think you play off that annoyance quite well, Audrey.
Yeah, unique. Aud isn’t my nickname for nothing, Sir. 😉
“Beyond time”
–I’ve been thinking a bit lately about the limitations of time and space. The rush rush of life. Actually just posted a poem about it. Imagine how it would be without these limitations.
🙂
Time is forever never in my favor, Staci. I don’t have near enough of it for my liking, so much I’d rather be getting accomplished these days. Without time beating down my door, I’d be set for sure. I enjoyed your poem. I’m always on time, however I never know when to leave, hence always putting in too much time. Ugh. Have a great day! ~Audrey
I totally understand. Looks like we’re in the same boat.
You have a great day too.
🙂
Yeah, same boat. Welcome. Tea?
Hugs!
Hilarious.
🙂
Beautiful imagery and surrendering pace. Love, “devouring our setting sun”. Great job. Peace. ~ Michael
Thank you, Michael. Can’t think of any other way one would spend their time by the end of the day. I’m so glad you enjoyed this poem. ~Audrey
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Thank you! So glad you enjoyed this poem. ~Audrey
You’re Welcome. 🙂