Three pushing inside of me:
What I want to do – I cannot do
What I want to write – I cannot write
What I want to say – I cannot say
What I want to believe – I fight to believe
Three comfortable inside of me:
What I can do is dream – I shall dream
What I can do is think – I shall think
What I can do is feel – I shall feel
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What shall you feel? ………. Alive!!
I suppose so!
Yes!!
🙂
Lovely 🙂
Thank you, Mr. Justice 🙂
I really like this. I feel like I connect with it. I’m a big dreamer and thinker, but when it comes to actually doing things to achieve those dreams, it can be very discouraging. Your poem makes me think of how an artist is sometimes their own worst enemy through their self-doubt and insecurities.
TK, that’s exactly where this poem was headed orginally. I have a lot to accomplish and definitely feel the pressures of life.
I’m pretty sure I was born thinking and haven’t sropped yet. Makes for lots of questioning along the way.
I’m glad I care share this with you. We can encourage each other.
~Audrey
The first paragraph is so true! I really liked this.
I’m not surprised that you liked this one, Duke. Eye to eye on this one. 🙂
Yes, yes and katana to katana.
If you wish, Duketh. 🙂
And you know I do!
Well let’s get on with it then. Katanas unite! I think I’ve said that already along the way somewhere. ..!
I don’t remember… which is surprising, since I’ve got such a stellar memory.
Yes, Duketh. Your memory has broken records in the past. Lasting what a few whole days!!
😆 you must have ruined me memory.
As you continue to ruin my mind.
Oh, do I? 😥
No…not really. I had no come back for that, Duke. You are getting too good at this…
It’s fun, isn’t it? 😀
Yes, like a full-time job lately. 😉 😆
😆
😆 😆 You make me laugh..this was hysterical.
Interesting form. I like the simple question/answer method. Very clear.
You are too nice…not sure this is any sort of form. Maybe more verbal diarrhea. Yet, I enjoyed how it came out. Clearly. 😉
In that case, name it and claim it. 😉
Okay, I will. 🙂
Thank you.
Thanks for reading, Ann.