if anything, I see
beauty returns eventually,
subtle drops of rain
worth clinging to fall down, eventually.
robins bounce about
puddles found,
my eyes search cloud ripples
finding your name,
and summertime is born
maybe that’s all there is to say.
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I like the optimism in this poem, Audrey, and of course, you conveyed it beautifully, too. 💗
Thanks, Lauren
Nice to know I’m not the only one living in the clouds these days! Lovely words, Poetess.
Emotions well spent, Aud. Beautifully.
Thanks so much, Chum. So nice to have you stop by.
And maybe this is enough – and maybe there is more to come. This poem is hopeful – I like that.
I’m glad you see hopeful. Thank you, Shari
“beauty returns eventually…”
You always manage to find beauty and to capture it in the sweetest words. The many emotions are powerful, but I’m hanging with optimism.
Thankful for moments when I can see the beautiful. Grateful for your thinking so, too.
The back of the class loves the picture.
Thank you, C. You don’t give yourself enough credit.
Nor do some others but anyway….
Beautifully done Audrey. ❤
Thanks a lot, Penny
A beautiful poem Audrey, pure and concise.
Lovely Audrey.
Thanks, Holly
You’re so very welcome. A beautiful poem!
Means a lot to know you think so, H.
I do know so! 🙂
A short but significant work, Audrey. I like the positive tone, the optimism and the belief in goodness.
Big hugs
jf
What I love is that you found happiness living in this poem. The indifference I felt within me thanks you for the boost, jf. Hugs ♡
Summer is nature’s gift for putting up with winter. Nicely done, Audrey
So true, John. Thank you ♡
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“my eyes join … searching your name” beautifully done
Your approval means so much, Candice, as I appreciate your talented eye.
I thank you for being near.
ALWAYS 💓
Thank you ♡