Blue Shiver


Tarry a shiver
Feather on through
Allow blissful moments
Ultramarine view, paradise


45 thoughts on “Blue Shiver

  1. Oh, for a beautiful day like that! Audrey, I NEED some sunshine — I tolerate the cold, but the dreariness is most off-putting. Guess I shouldn’t complain, though. I’m not shoveling like those poor folks out East, nor am I fretting over the power going out and freezing half to death!


  2. I like the poem, reminds me of Blue October’s “Into The Ocean”. I noticed the pattern as well, 3 words per line, each line a little longer than the last. Nice form!

    (Feel free to send me a re-follow request. I wanted to step back from public blogging for awhile, and setting my blog to private forced everyone to automatically unsubscribe!)


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