Love winks when you’d rather ignore
Love consumes when you’d rather starve
Love explains when you’d rather stay silent
Love excuses when you’d rather blame
Love is consistent when you’d rather defer
Love proves when you’d rather theorize
Love believes when you’d rather crumble
Love conquers when you’d rather retreat
Love can be amazing, understand me, please
Love is what I feel about this poem. One beautiful line after another.
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Love is what I feel when I receive this kind of comment, Gus. Thank you, my dear. π
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Yes, to the whole damn thing, right, Aud.
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Yep! π Thanks, Chum. β₯
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I agree with the logic in the poem. Love is given freely when we are willing to accept. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
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Thank you, John. Your poetry is a continued source of inspiration. β₯
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The incomparable Audrey does it again!
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Thank you, Kate! You are too kind!!!
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Yeah okay I understand. Can I go now?
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Yes, you may. Thank you for listening so intently, John.
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π
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I love how this poem is set up! Excellent. But it doesn’t apply to the professor, you know.
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Thank you, Duketh!! Wow. How sweet of you… I can’t win them all, I guess.
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No. I win them all! *laughs* At least, I try.
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*chases after you with her umbrella* scoot!! I try, too.
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*wonders if it’s a sword umbrella*
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*wonders why he would thinketh anything other than a sword umbrella* I’ve been ruined. *winks*
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It’s good you think like a warrior.
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I suppose so.
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Great final line. Love seems a bit pushy though.
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Thanks, Charles! Yes, but it has to be, I think for those who fight it. π
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Another wow and a potent last line. π
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Hey! Thanks… rather pleading of me but I thought it suited the thought.
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It was good
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Thanks. π What are you doing today? Editing still?
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Amongst other things I was writing a 400 word flash fiction to submit to a mag.
I really should do more of that as I sit on it all. I’ll maybe post it later to see what people think.
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Really? You should do that more, actually. Please post it! I’d enjoy reading it.
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Ok, I will in a few hours time.
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No rush. It’ll be a few hours before I’m back online. Have a great afternoon. π
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Have a great midday π
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Thanks π
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*sigh* ….. long one ….. Just beautiful, Audrey. Thank you! Love, Amy
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Aww, thank you, Amy. Hugs!! Glad you liked the poem. Remember this, okay? π
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Love does conquer all. It really does. That is what I focus on or at the very least, try. Thank you, Audrey. (((HUGS)))
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Exactly! You’re welcome!
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(SMILE)
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Love understands when you’re left confused. π
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A beautiful addition, Mark. Thank you!
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My pleasure, absolutely!
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*blush* That means a lot.
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