Regret
Tightly packaged
Locked Inside
Yesterday
Words I should have said
Expressed, simply
I love you
My mind convinced
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My mind convinced
I love you
Expressed, simply
Words I should have said
Yesterday
Locked inside
Tightly packaged
Regret
Great reflection, Aud.
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Thank you, my dear. xx
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Works well forward & backward.
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I’ve written another poem this way. They’re kinda fun… Thank you. xx
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Now that was real cool–how you reversed it like that! But it is sad. And I’m on the beach.
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Thank you, Duketh. A poem that reads down and then up, you see. Yes, tis sad. Which one are you??
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I dig it totally. I’m off to the left.
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You dig it, huh? Thanks. There you are…nice.
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I do! More like awkward looking you mean… *laughs*
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Okay….settle down, Duke. *laughs* Not at all! How rude of you…however, in this photo you do tend to look a lot like the others.
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*nods* Very true. I am like the others. But I can fly further than any of them!
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*smiles* because you work out too much and have huge muscles!
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*smiles* Something like that.
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Yes, tis so. *sparkles*
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Yeah, should have said them. Nice poem.
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Yeah, should have, darn it. Thank you, Butch ♡
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Pointing out the obvious is as welcome as a stone in a shoe.
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Agreed 😦 Ouch.
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Ah… I… Gah… there are no words to describe on how many levels this poem is just soooooooooooooooo great!
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♡ You always know just what to say to make me smile! *blush* Thank you soooooo much, Luke.
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You’re welcome. ::D
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::)
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Whoa… my smiley had four eyes. o.0
Typo…
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It’ll be okay… I four eye smiled back at you! xx But I’ll fix it if the typo will keep you up at night, Luke. Giggle. Hugs! Have a great week.
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XD No, it’s fine. Four-eyed smiley makes sense considering how blind I am without contacts or glasses.
You have a great week too!
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Agreed! *puts on her glassess* We match!
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😀
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Audrey, this one made me smile bigly! I love the mirrored format, and you know, I really miss seeing seagulls and hearing them call out. You are soooo creative!!
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Awe, thanks, Debbie. Glad you liked the poem and the creativity behind it. I try. 🙂 I took a few pictures and will show them along the way. *blush* xx
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Wonderful format of the poem — and photo to go along with it. There’s the line “locked inside,” but you speak well through your poems. And I hope the birds didn’t steal your lunch when you were on the beach 🙂
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Hey, You. Found the line…look at you go. 🙂 Thank you for encouraging me, Gus. Nope, I had nothing for them to eat…this time. xx
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Ah~! A convention of seagulls.
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You won’t believe how many made the conference, Susan. 🙂
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I’m Back
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Hey, Sugar. I missed you. ♡
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And you’re gone. 😦
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No. I’m here
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Okay. Don’t go. Can I help?
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That’s nice. I love reflections of birds on water and wet sand and your poem compliments that perfectly.
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Thank you, Dan. I do, as well. Catching this opportunity was a little surreal. Hundreds of them flocking in and out and each one with a mirrored image when it landed. Gorgeous. It’s great having you stop in and say hi. Enjoy your Monday.
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Absolutely gorgeous and so so clever!
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Thank you, Willow 🙂 I tried.. ♡
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