Longing poetry
Encourages my heart to beat
Evidently, written for me
Or so I’ve imagined
Lost inside a busy afternoon, yet
Aching for your five ‘ o’clock shadow
Longing poetry
Encourages my heart to beat
Evidently, written for me
Or so I’ve imagined
Lost inside a busy afternoon, yet
Aching for your five ‘ o’clock shadow
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
Marvelous. Marvelous!!!
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Hey, Flirty B. 🙂 I get two from you, huh? I don’t know if anyone has ever done that, you know. You really think so? Or are you a fan of that final line, as well? You’re one of those poets I find myself enjoying regularly, but not often enough, Sir. How are you?
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I’m marvelous, for the most part. But could always be better or worse. Thanks for asking. Yes, marvelous work. I hope you’re good, too!
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I think your marvelous, as well. Yes, tis true could always better or worse… *laughs* we’re given two options always, I think. I’m good, yes.
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Tremendous ~ within these six lines, you’ve created a story that is so much deeper and made so by that perfect last line. Wonderful!
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I’m pretty psych ‘ d that you love this poem, Dalo. I’ve been working on that short story you pushed me to write. I think you ought to show off your 5 o’clock shadow.. 😉 I think this is my first ‘tremendous’ compliment I’ve ever gotten and it just so happens to be from my favorite guy. Thank you!
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It was just the right time to break out the ‘tremendous’ compliment ~ I’d been waiting so long to do so 🙂
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Aww. I’m glad I finally wrote a poem you could use the million dollar word on, Dalo. You don’t fool me…I see past your flirty words to see your eye roll. 😉
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That’s a great one Miss Audith. Hmm…5 shadows are usually vicious!
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Thank you, Duketh. *blush* So formal today…
Yes, but you know I like vicious.
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That’s true, you (and I) do… Yes, I was in a formal mood. Must’ve been the long black cloak thingy.
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Yes….but how vicious, Duke? Oh really? Is it because you’re playing Bach on your nameless guitar? *reflects* What cloak thingy?? Where did you go without me this time?
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Very vicious? Well…you’ll find out tomorrow! But…downtown Pittsburgh, actually.
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Very? Wow. Okay… I’ve not been to Pittsburgh, so how will I know for sure? You could be in…Buffalo.
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Nah, it’s Pittsburgh. The US Steel building…you’ll see it in the shoot.
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It’s beautiful…I loved the video.
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Thank you! I have to laugh when I see it.
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Why? What makes you laugh? I want to know, Duke.
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How I walk, I think. It’s just funny to see yourself.
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You were walking with determination, Duke. Almost if you were about to punch someone in the face. *smiles* Yeah…I have no doubt. I was asked to sing a Christmas carol, record it and post it on my blog to help encourage people to get in the holiday spirit. Not even the force of Twitter will get me to do that…ever. Ha. I think you’re brave.
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*laughs* Yes! I bet I was going to war the sudden. Me either! I’d be nervous to do that.
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Who were you fighting? I want to know… Yes, I shan’t do it. If I did I would sing Mary Did You Know.
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That’s an awesome song.
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It is!! Don’t listen to my version…. I couldn’t allow myself to chicken out…
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I certainly will! In just a minute here…
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Too late to run offense on that, huh? *digs her grave*
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Beautifully written!
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Good Morning, Gus. Thank you!
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The five o’clock shadow sprung out of nowhere. Great touch, Aud.
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I have been thinking about how those feel for a few days now, so I thought it was time to get the five o’clock shadow out of my mind. Had to be done, Zak. 🙂 Thank you.
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Your mind is a marvelous well, Aud.
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This is well written, Audrey, very well written. Yes!
jf
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Naw. It was just fun to lighten the stress a bit. Enjoy your break, jf. You’ll be missed.♡ (but thank you for saying so..)
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Evidently 🙂
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🙂 Ha. I think I’ve read too much too quickly, maybe and lost in a dream world somewhere.
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And what’s wrong with that? Absolutely nothing, right?
🙂
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Exactly. I got you to smile! 🙂 xx
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And I’m smiling right now too. Hehe 🙂
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Haha. Go find your five ‘o clock shadow, Girl. 🙂
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What? Right now? Hmmmmm, nah. Think I’ll go to bed. After midnight here. 🙂
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Ha. Poor guy. Sleep well, Staci. xx
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Nah. He’s already asleep.
Thanks Audrey.
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🙂
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