I should be peacefully dreaming,
Instead my mind is easily consumed,
With thoughts of gravitational mystery.
Like the traveling clouds in this sky,
I feel a desire to submit to the wind.
Towards an undeniable power, gently,
An untold story from beginning to end,
One I need to believe is eventually ours.
Reminds me of the days when my sons were little, watching the clouds and wondering where they are going and what they are seeing. Loved it.
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I’m so glad this poem brought back special memories for you. I appreciate you stopping by. Thanks.~ Audrey
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Very fine writing!
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Hi! Thank you and welcome, Heartafire. I’m happy to have you stop by for a read. Love that gravatar of yours. π
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Reblogged this on booknvolume and commented:
This says so very much, so very gently.
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Well, now you’ve gone above and beyond, my dear sweet favorite poetess. Wow. Thank you so much… Humbled and thrilled that you enjoyed this poem. β₯
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I really did…its almost as if you reached into my heart and soul and wrote it π Thank You!
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Aww!!! β₯that!!! π xxx
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OH I have been there many nights…watching the hours slide away while my heart hammers for love that is not beside me ;( GREAT verse!
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I feel as though I’m in perfect company then, my friend. I appreciate you! β₯β₯
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Gravitational mystery. For Newton, it was an apple. π
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From us nonscientist types. ..thanks for the reminder. π I’m glad he figured gravity out, you know. At some point I’ll catch up. Arts and crafts, Chris? π
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Is it warm in Nebraska?
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It is warm, but not as humid as it is in Houston. The evenings have been fairly cool, which is nice. Loads of tornadoes today, Duketh. They were an hour north of us, but it was still nerve wracking.
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Oh no! Well, stay safe. I hope it passes. I’m sure that would be quite scary!
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Yes, safe is key!! We’ll encounter a lot of it..tis Nebraska, you know.
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Huff-Hum, what a wonder. Tornadoes are so destructive, too.
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We had 70+ mph winds our first night here. I was awake writing on the second floor when I heard the wind pick up and make that humming sound… yikes. I paced around the dark house looking through the windows. Found Middle looking out one as well at…2AM. We looked at each other and I said, “Jel, I’m scared. This doesn’t sound right.” She said, I know, but Big Brother always calls the house before he signals the town’s whistle.” Fifteen seconds later Big Brother the fire chief notified the whole town to take cover. Welcome home, Aud. He told me I could go storm watching with him next time and I will. It has been a long time since I’d heard that familiar tornado sound. Just to meet my fear head on I’ll go with him. He teaches me a lot.
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Oh my! That would be scary. But it’s familiar to you. Yes! definitely go with Mr. Big Brother. And he’s a fire chief too, which is really really cool. Glad nothing came of the storm, though!
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Yes, it is familiar, but I fell far to secure in not worrying about a tornado. Yes, he also wears many hats, Duketh.
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And he has a big red truck, if I remember correctly. Sounds like a splendid fellow.
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Your memory has been great lately, Duketh. *pats you on the back*
Well, I think he is… very manly. *laughs*
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The professor has an exceptional memory, you know.
A warrior!
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Yes, well you’ve been trying to prove that, I think. Impressive! Me, too.
Oh really!
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Your words have a different pull to them these days, right now, Audrey, at home.
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I’m surrounded by memories. Good and bad, but I love being here, Chum.
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I can read the change, Aud.
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Thanks, Mark. Glad it shows…
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Makes me think of spring when the weather is just right for cloud watching. Not too hot and not too cold.
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Yes, me too. I really love an afternoon of thinking and clouds. I say, why not! π
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Beats staring at the ceiling. π
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Yes, but those fans can be interesting. π
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As long as you dust them first. Only takes one time to learn that.
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Yes, of course! π
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With thoughts of gravitational mystery. That is a great line, and such deep thoughts π Like clouds in the sky submitting to the wind, Nebraska is going to be great for you.
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This one is as billowy as the clouds, huh?
π Deep, yes, so it seems. (I do love this one.) I’m glad you think Nebraska looks good on me. I’ve always thought so…
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It occurs to me Audrey that given your poetic productivity your mind must be permanently consumed in something! π Nice piece.
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However, you do a fine job of finding the 1/25 that has potential. π Thank you, Mike.
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Very lovely, Audrey. Them clouds have got a hold of you.
PS
Hope you’re having a great time.
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Thank you. These are Nebraska clouds, Sleepy. Yet, my mind still wondering the same…
(The best! I’ve missed them so…)
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π
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