Spirit flying near me
My muse
What are you asking of me
Courage
Believability
Authenticity
A face I cannot see
Has created
Stunning poetry
Spirit
I sense you
Pushing to leave
Even flee
Tell me
Give me
The words
I need
To make you
Stay
I can beg
Don’t leave me
Effortlessly
Promising
I’ll be good
My need
Nothing
Pitiful
Really
Craving to be near
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love love love love love this one Audrey!
If it hadn’t been for AB, and his guidance, I wouldn’t have released the emotion I needed to share. So glad you love this, Poetess. It’s and OLD one!
Im Glad as well 🙂 AB..Alton Brown? 🙂 (lol sorry, it was the first name that popped into my head!) I was meandering your blog and so glad I was because I found this gem. You should re-post it 😉
I’ve never reposted anything I’ve written. I don’t consider it, probably because WHO NEEDS TO READ THIS AGAIN!!?!?! LOL
Oh, I beg to differ. This is lovely. the honesty of this piece is gripping and who knows who it may reach/touch? I repost, and often it gives me an change to tweak the original a bit. Its interesting to see how my thoughts about the poem have changed, or how my mood has shifted since I wrote it.
Okay. You have me thinking. Thank you for that, my friend.
I hear you, loud and clear. I’m always craving to be near.
🙂
🙂 I think it is truly fascinating how our inspiration comes to us. Everyday it is new.
This is beautifully written Audrey.
Thank you, Sir. Did you catch the one I just posted?
No, but I will look
Great
Oh dear. Audrey, this is great. I have been away and this is the first thing I read by you in so long? The words–they speak. They say what I have been going through. Wow! Take care – Amy 🙂
Thanks, Amy. I’ve missed hearing from you. Hope all is well. Then these words were meant for you, as they are a bit foreign to me in spots. Phew! So glad you caught them!!!
Haha. You are so funny–a hoot! Sometimes I have to break away. 😀
🙂 I understand!
My muse is my compass?
Yes. Yes. Yes. Simple.
McDonald’s playground was closed again!
I’ve seen many PlayLand’s disappear. Yet even when they do, many kids still seem to love Mickie Dee’s just the same.
😀 Indeed!!
I’m done with begging too, it’s not worth the price tag. God bless you abundantly today.
Thank you, dear. And you as well.
This is one of hope, I think.
Let’s hope then, okay. Cause I’m done with begging. It doesn’t look good on this redhead.
Is everything okay, Audith?
Yes. Why? You really seem to catch when I feel a bit off. I don’t know how you do that, Duke. It can be a bit unnerving and very sweet. What makes your question so funny and ironic is that I just wrote a poem about not asking me how I am…Now the poem would make the professor blush, but it is intended to be funny, as I’m not much of a chit chat kind of girl. I should post it just so you believe me. (I am really okay. Okay?)
Well, the professor can see into the words, I guess. I know! I just saw the poem and I was like, “Woops. That’s just what I asked last night!” Goodness me. It was a funny poem and vicious. Which I like. I really enjoyed the reoccurring line. I should’ve said that over there. (I believe you! I won’t ask if you’d prefer me not too, in the future…)
😆 Very funny, indeed. I’m glad you liked it. (No, ask! We must continue to ask.)
Okay we will! Now I feel like Golem a bit, you know.
Oh no…how so, I don’t know him very well.
Me neither. I think he was nice once, though.
I may have to ask around….
Very beautiful and touching AD 🙂 may you always keep writing wonderful words like these 🙂
Thank you, AB. Hoping they continue too. But, as it says, I have my doubts.
You will be fine 🙂 just keep putting that heart on the plate and all would be amazing and great…:-)
Thanks for the encouragement.