Spirit flying near me
My muse
What are you asking of me
Courage
Believability
Authenticity
A face I cannot see
Has created
Stunning poetry
Spirit
I sense you
Pushing to leave
Even flee
Tell me
Give me
The words
I need
To make you
Stay
I can beg
Don’t leave me
Effortlessly
Promising
I’ll be good
My need
Nothing
Pitiful
Really
Craving to be near
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
love love love love love this one Audrey!
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If it hadn’t been for AB, and his guidance, I wouldn’t have released the emotion I needed to share. So glad you love this, Poetess. It’s and OLD one!
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Im Glad as well 🙂 AB..Alton Brown? 🙂 (lol sorry, it was the first name that popped into my head!) I was meandering your blog and so glad I was because I found this gem. You should re-post it 😉
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I’ve never reposted anything I’ve written. I don’t consider it, probably because WHO NEEDS TO READ THIS AGAIN!!?!?! LOL
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Oh, I beg to differ. This is lovely. the honesty of this piece is gripping and who knows who it may reach/touch? I repost, and often it gives me an change to tweak the original a bit. Its interesting to see how my thoughts about the poem have changed, or how my mood has shifted since I wrote it.
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Okay. You have me thinking. Thank you for that, my friend.
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I hear you, loud and clear. I’m always craving to be near.
🙂
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🙂 I think it is truly fascinating how our inspiration comes to us. Everyday it is new.
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This is beautifully written Audrey.
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Thank you, Sir. Did you catch the one I just posted?
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No, but I will look
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Great
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Oh dear. Audrey, this is great. I have been away and this is the first thing I read by you in so long? The words–they speak. They say what I have been going through. Wow! Take care – Amy 🙂
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Thanks, Amy. I’ve missed hearing from you. Hope all is well. Then these words were meant for you, as they are a bit foreign to me in spots. Phew! So glad you caught them!!!
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Haha. You are so funny–a hoot! Sometimes I have to break away. 😀
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🙂 I understand!
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My muse is my compass?
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Yes. Yes. Yes. Simple.
McDonald’s playground was closed again!
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I’ve seen many PlayLand’s disappear. Yet even when they do, many kids still seem to love Mickie Dee’s just the same.
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😀 Indeed!!
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I’m done with begging too, it’s not worth the price tag. God bless you abundantly today.
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Thank you, dear. And you as well.
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This is one of hope, I think.
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Let’s hope then, okay. Cause I’m done with begging. It doesn’t look good on this redhead.
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Is everything okay, Audith?
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Yes. Why? You really seem to catch when I feel a bit off. I don’t know how you do that, Duke. It can be a bit unnerving and very sweet. What makes your question so funny and ironic is that I just wrote a poem about not asking me how I am…Now the poem would make the professor blush, but it is intended to be funny, as I’m not much of a chit chat kind of girl. I should post it just so you believe me. (I am really okay. Okay?)
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Well, the professor can see into the words, I guess. I know! I just saw the poem and I was like, “Woops. That’s just what I asked last night!” Goodness me. It was a funny poem and vicious. Which I like. I really enjoyed the reoccurring line. I should’ve said that over there. (I believe you! I won’t ask if you’d prefer me not too, in the future…)
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😆 Very funny, indeed. I’m glad you liked it. (No, ask! We must continue to ask.)
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Okay we will! Now I feel like Golem a bit, you know.
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Oh no…how so, I don’t know him very well.
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Me neither. I think he was nice once, though.
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I may have to ask around….
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Very beautiful and touching AD 🙂 may you always keep writing wonderful words like these 🙂
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Thank you, AB. Hoping they continue too. But, as it says, I have my doubts.
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You will be fine 🙂 just keep putting that heart on the plate and all would be amazing and great…:-)
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Thanks for the encouragement.
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