Making you understand
Doesn’t scare me
Colors alive
Unyielding
My words will flow
Your reserve
Will die
Slowly
Succumbing
A believability
Love lives
Beats true
Never faltering
Adjust your eyes
Open your heart
Our love survives
Kiss me sometimes
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
I agree, that last line is gold.
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I appreciate that. I will pass it along. 😉
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I must say–and don’t make anything of it!–I loved that last line, too. 🙂
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😀 😀 😀 Where is that water coming from, Duketh? Oh, its the ice melting off your heart. Let’s bottle it!!
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There was a sudden freeze last night. Oh dear. 😀
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Get a coat and I’ll grab the ice pick. Where’d I put that?
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You might shatter it, dadblameit!
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We must take the risk… lol
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My poor heart…might now get shattered by a woman.
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I truly hope not, yet you did admit to hitting on a woman and it not going well. I will do my best to keep your heart in tact while using the ice pick, as the other one may have already shattered it. 🙂 😆
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I did no such thing! She asked for a compliment and I gave one.
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I don’t see my head nodding in agreement at all, Duketh. 😀
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Mine either… 😆
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😆 Pfft!!! Seriously?
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Don’t tell anyone!
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Tell them what…? 🙂
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That my head is not nodding in agreement either. 🙂
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😆 Well then!
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Love the last line… ‘Kiss me sometimes.’ Not so much to ask of a lover, is it – just ‘sometimes’? I found that very poignant. Not too much to ask of any loved one. ‘Open your heart.’ Beautiful, Audrey Dawn. You have the gift.
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Thanks, Kate. The lovely one with the kindest of words. Hugs. I love these three simple words. Glad you did, too.
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Wonderful 🙂 Blessings and Joy, Friend~
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Thank you, Morgan, my friend.
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Love, love, love the last 3 lines, especially, Kiss me sometimes.
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Thank you, Shari. You know, those may always be my three favorite words. 🙂
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Then you may like to know that I included them in my personal “Thought for the day” file.
Kiss me sometimes
Yeah……
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I’m thrilled 🙂
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Beautiful 🙂 very well done AD, rock on 🙂
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So glad you enjoyed it, AB. 😀 Rock on…you make me laugh. 😆 Thank you.
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🙂
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Love the power in this poem. 🙂
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Thank you, Charles. It’s all a process. 😀
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