Perfection
Can’t be achieved
Try as we may
You already are to me
Stop, anon
Believe
Mind courageous
Notes waiting at full attention
Command the ears of those you seek
Relax, appreciate the work you’re doing
Mustn’t let them see the uncertainty
You were created for accolades
One day proving complete sense
Your heart’s passion
Heaven sent
Not sure how I missed this! Maybe it’s in the dadblame inbox…
Truly lovely, Audith! You definitely have a way with words.
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Thanks, Duke.
I hope it helps V. and gives the battle axe owner some comfort when playing…. remember why you love it, Duketh.
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You’d be surprised how many times I forget. Surprisingly, the best times are behind closed doors, me and the instrument. (There is a rush from being on stage, but…)
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Duketh…you are quite the man.
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I wish I could hear more about that but I know that day will come.
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It will. π
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Whenith? What is your favorite song to play? I want to listen to it.
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I’m not sure. π Well, right now I’m practicing Canarios by Gaspar Sanz.
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I am. π I’ve never heard of it. Is it romantic? I can only imagine a classical guitar playing romantically. I’m sure that it isn’t always the case, but I find it hard to imagine.
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You are? How so? π
If you google it, John Williams will come up. But I like Angel’s version better. (Angel Romero.)
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I don’t just feel it. Ok, I will listen to it. At least it’ll be something….
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That’s when such things happen.
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Yeah… π
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Well done, I love the uncertainty of confidence in such a confidently written piece of prose.
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Gosh, thank you, Susan. That is a fantastic line!!
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Excellent poem. Is it supposed to be shaped like a guitar? I noticed that word in the tags.
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Thank you. No. I wish I had time to make my poems into shapes. I think that can be pretty cool. Guitar goes with the music tag.
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Got it. I’ve only been able to do poems shaped like pieces of the Triforce from Legend of Zelda.
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I think that is super cool. I should try something.
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Beautiful warm words… I can give more accolades if you want lol … but honestly you deserve it
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Hey, thank youβ¦.You could? π I hope the poem brought you encouragement. It’s meant to encourage the creative mind.
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Yeah of course π As for encouragement we sure need it
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I hope others come here to get a boost, too, like I did
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Me, too. But I’m happy with your visit and comment. I like when the quiet ones stop by…
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Wait…there are others? π
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There are. You mean you can’t feel them. The vibrations of their breathing permeate the ether if you try to empty your mind to absorb the ether’s energy. π
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Oh! That’s what that hum is… sounds confusing. π
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Lol Seriously, I’m certain others besides me are reading it now or will in the morning.
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Yeah, I have a few I can count on to stop by. Glad I was up to say Hi to you. Don’t be a stranger. I appreciate the sweet words…
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Promise not to be a stranger π to be here dutifully, so help me….haha. G’nite
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Yay! Goodnight π
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Of course, in line 2, I want to add “at McDonald’s.” π Mickie Dee’s jokes aside, nice poem. π
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I’ll take that joke, Chris. You know how much I like our sharing fries at Mickie Dee’s. π Thank you.
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