kiss her – do it now
now before she turns away
let her finally feel your lips
you must, you must, you must
its Valentine’s Day soon
she’ll want it to be you
take her, grab her, do it
go, my love, she’s waiting
oh, fall in, fall in, fall in
let me walk away first
I can’t bare watching
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
This one is the story of my life.
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There are many types of love. This one can be a tough one. I had one in high school and college.
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Why can’t you bear watching?
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I was trying to write a poem about unrequited love. You know, the one where the woman watches the man she loves fall for someone else. She giving him her blessing yet unable to watch. It seems I messed it up because you are the second one who has been confused.
I’m just going to go with he chose her in the end. Much less complicated. 🙂
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No, no! I like this. A bit of mystery is great. I like the ending, too. But someone should make her man up and watch.
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You are meaner than mean, Duketh. She’d never survive that!
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Would she die?
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You’d like that wouldn’t you? No, I think she’s much too brave for that.
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I would not like that! The professor actually feels sorry for her. If I was there, I’d really want to help her.
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Gross. Feeling sorry for her is worse than wishing her dead.
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Oh…okay, let’s kill her, then.
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Oh, Duketh! What will I do with you?
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Eat cashew muffins?
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Ok, let do that instead. Let me get busy. I’ve nothing else to do today.
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Just don’t take her to McDonald’s to express your love. I definitely can’t bear watching that. 🙂 (Seems like Mickie Dee’s will be infecting billions and billions of blogs… That, somehow, I can bear…)
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Please, do not take her to McDonalds. Talk about greasy! 🙂 (Billions and billions of blogs… 😀 )
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I wanted to start cheering LOL
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You did, and then I ruined it for you. Sorry… 😉
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It’s ok
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Why can’t you bare watching…. is the guy grotesquely deformed? 😉
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Typical…you say it and run!! 😉 Contrary, indeed!
NO! Must I define unrequited for you, Kenneth? LOL I’m quiet sure he’s her idea of fantastic.
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Maybe she is grotesque and hideous looking and finds him to be attractive…. ever see Shrek 😉 …ha ha as if someone with the voice of Cameron Diaz could ever look like a big green monster… but I digress :0p
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Well, that could very well be, actually!! Must be why he’s looking for kisses in other places!!
I know, right? I mean seriously, she’s way to pretty for that body! Digress, yes, once again. 😀
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“must be why he’s looking for kisses in other places!!”
? gosh…. that sounds a bit to, uh..a.spicy for your blog Ms. Audrey…. unless you meant it in some clean way that I can’t figure out!
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Umm, I was simply stating that he was interested in kissing that other woman…
LOL…I’m shocked!! My mouth is wide open and my head is tilted…safe to say I meant kissing someone else’s lips. You’ve twisted my words…Twisted Kennth..your new name.
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😉 well I’m not sure what is worse… kissing the OTHER woman from the one your with… or kissing your own woman somewhere else other than her lips…..
I think my innocent mistake is better than your guy being interested in kissing the OTHER woman….. 😉
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Oh, you are so innocent. (shakes her head) 😉
She isn’t the OTHER woman. He can’t help that this sick and twisted “friend” wants him to be happy even if it isn’t with her. He is completely innocent in all of this.
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i AM innocent, I was talking about ‘other’ places like, kiss her on the cheek in the park, or kiss her on the forehead beside a gently flowing river…….
i do declare Ms Audrey, I certainly don’t know what you thought I was implying 😉
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Of course! My mistake, indeed. Parks, puppies and ice cream cones, right? 🙂
😉 Are you suddenly southern, Kenneth?
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Yea….southern fit the moment…. like it says in the good book, “I am all things to all people” and it suddenly hit me that a southern twang might come off as more innocently sounding ha ha …..
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LOL Are you implying that I use my southern twang to come off as innocent…Kenneth… 😉
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NEVER! …… 😉
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*kicks your shin* That’s what I thought! 😀
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