Hurry night, I’ve something waiting!
I have dreaming of tomorrows to show you
Wild thoughts I continue to prepare
Oh! What my mind does for you.
Proving what you can do, will do.
I lift you up through the clouds
I love to watch you strut about!
Thoughts of you, anticipating
Tomorrow, I beg you to open up
Show me what you’re needing
Maybe you’ll consume all of me
Tomorrow, you suit my dreams
I know my mind, I know it well
It isn’t safe
I shouldn’t go
Oh, but I will

I like the strident creature within you it seems determined to escape. Don’t let it because it keeps you humming.
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What a fantastic compliment. I’m speechless. Thank you!
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π
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This is a creature inside of you, sharing your mind. Seems rather friendly, though I worry about the ‘it isn’t safe’, like stepping into a minefield. Be careful!
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Let’s get it out, shall we? Done. π
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You capture the urgency and longing of thought very well. Good Job!
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Thank you. This one was a bit of a leap. I’m glad you stopped by and commented. I appreciate your input so much. π
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Sometimes the night is so inconvenient. Nice poem, by the way, Audith. You’re pretty good at doing those.
Did you have a great holiday season?
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It is, I agree. It’s waiting for tomorrows that I seem to be most feverish with these days. I’m wondering if this means you’re officially back, Duketh.
My holiday season was terrific. I enjoyed all of my time with my sisters and Big Brother. I have lots of stories to tell. It was too quiet over at the PL. I didn’t like that much, btw. How was your holiday?
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Yes, it does, I believe. π
That’s great. We should be back, I think.
It was awesome. Besides getting the flu on New Year’s which I’m still fighting. Such a professorish way to start the new year.
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π I probably need to focus on other writings.
Awesome, thats great! Ugh. Flu, well atleast it wasn’t while you were too busy. Sounds like you needed soup. It is very professorish indeed.
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Sword fighting writings? π
Oh, I did need soup, for sure!
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Yes, like that. I did those already.
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The professor is waiting patiently, but he won’t be patient for long, you know…
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Ok. I’ll choose one of them and post it soon. Maybe Friday so I have the weekend to keep from having to look at you. I was just waiting to see if you remembered…
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The professor is ugly, but you should still look at him.
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What I meant was shy away from your honest critique. Hope I chose the right one to post.
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You did! It was excellent!!!
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Really? Oh good! I’m relieved, Duketh!
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