confusion sets the tone
pitch black
forlorn
nothing makes sense
and I’m suddenly alone
highlighted: is
everything i lack
confusion sets the tone
pitch black
forlorn
nothing makes sense
and I’m suddenly alone
highlighted: is
everything i lack
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
I love the somber beauty of this one. We all have these moments and you’ve expressed it well. Powerfully Lovely, Audrey!
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Know that fear you get when you realize it’s just too good to be true. Yeah, hit me and this came out. Thanks for sitting in for this one, friend.
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Yes, I know that fear all too (flipping) well 😦 (although I’ll share a tidbit of info with you …no longer ;)) 🙂 🙂
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You are precious. Sending you strength and encouraging your path. Hugs!!
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Thank You my sweet Poet Sister 🙂 So far, its been exceptionally SO Good 🙂
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Awesome! 🙂
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may there
be other channels,
light & bright,
to change to 🙂
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So good to see you here. Thank you. Light would be perfect.
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Hopefully morose was a fleeting sensation.
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It was, and maybe how I was feeling was a bit premature. I guess time will tell.
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That frightening moment!
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Yes, indeed. You know how I am.
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I think we all have bouts of these feelings. You said them well.
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Yes, thankfully they leave just as quick. ♡
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Brilliant
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Hi, Mike, thank you. You are very kind. Humbled and happy to see you around again.
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Never left. But thank you
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Feels nice to know. Thank you ♡
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Enchanting poem. I’m very moved by this one.
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I’m thankful. It’s nice having you near. Blessed by your words, you know. ♡
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my life, my music and my thought pattern neatly said right there. Brilliant! I love that you say so much in so few lines. Its wonderful wall of words has no equal. Much love and adoration as always xo
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Duke, last night as I was trying to reply to comments I was slapped with a realization. One I didn’t see coming. This poem came pouring out. This morning light returns, but there’s something about how I felt last night which brought on complete sadness. I hope my poem brought you positive feelings. Your outlook is a brilliant one. I can always count on you for a smile. Thank you for your praise. I’m humbled. Deeply. Much love to you. xoxo
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I’m chuffed my comments got you to smile : ) it definitely did bring out positivity and inspiration. Drop me an email sometime I have a pretty cool idea to throw by you! : ) XOXOXO
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Done and Done! : ) Emailed ya : ) xo
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