If I could stand on the sill 
Your cracked window, my home
I’d finish your every sentence
With one of my own
Caustic completed with growth
Tell me something I don’t already know


18 thoughts on “Close

  1. to be honest, Audrey, i find this a little strange and demanding, especially the use of ‘caustic’..that is not a criticism but a response from a reader who feels challenged by this…and then on the other hand i see ease and such intimacy between the two that there’s intimate understanding…i’ll go for the latter interpretation.

    Sorry for going on but good writing does that to me.

    Big Hugs



  2. ‘Tis lovely to be so well-understood (and to understand so deeply in return). Beautiful words to begin my weekend, Audrey — hope yours is splendid!


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