I saw you first
Yeah, you were there
All powerful
Demanding
Amongst the rest of your crew
Looking all cool and fascinating
Yes, you!
I felt nothing but intrigue
You were all my eyes could see
I approached you hesitantly
You would be a lot for me
Just look at your surroundings
Yet, our eyes locked
Yours shining
Mine craving
Suddenly I felt free
Heart quickening
Soul waking up
Life as we knew it – over
The submitting would take two
I asked for a moment from you
An agreement was made
We’d go for a quick ride outside
Sliding in took little effort
I’d waited a long time
Wondering how fast you’d take me
A shy girl with a thrill for a fast ride
One push from me
Fire created suddenly
With permission granted
You carefully took me
All those places I’d been craving
I’m not surprised
You knew what you were doing
Owning me by the first curve
My release finally coming
After admitting
I could easily dominate you
I sit here now satisfied
You with that stupid grin
I can’t wait to show you off
Dodge Charger
You couldn’t be hotter
You and your new car smell
My tomorrow’s Show And Tell
I love my new car!!
Mmm. The smell of a new car.
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It is the best. I just got back from a long drive. It goes so fast!
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heh, good for you. there are few things more enjoyable than the smell and feel of a powerful car,
i’m a muscle car fan from way back. have a ’71 Chevelle SS waiting for me on our farm…vroom!
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I couldn’t agree more and since this is my first brand new car I’m not biased at all. 😉
My mother’s side of the family loves muscle cars, which is where I get it from I think. Vroom vroom…ooo, a Chevelle. Nice!
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Cute. Oh, the passion of a new car…
🙂
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Thanks, Staci. I was feeling so silly last night after bringing home my new car.
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Ha ha ha, this is fabulous. Had I driven, it would have been a blue Mustang….
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Haha. Giggling still! There is just something about this car…vroom vroom! 🙂
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This brought back a lot of wonderful memories — some about cars. ~ Dennis
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Some about cars…well that sounds just about what this poem was intended for then, I’d say. 🙂
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Neatio! I love chargers… You’ll take me for a ride, right?
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Thanks! I just drove to work and the car relaxed me. How is that possible? 🙂 Of course I will!! Where shall we go?
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I’m not sure…Texas?
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I’m already here and there isn’t hills for hours…we’ll have to road trip to the Hill Country in order to really get the feel of the power. I drove home the long way… It owns me.
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Okay…how about…I don’t know. You tell me. I love driving the long way home.
You know, I’ve always wanted to see the Alamo.
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You’re the one with all the hills. I’ve never been to the east coast. Maybe I should drive this car to Maine…seems it is scary up there, at least that’s what King says.
Oh, me too, Duketh. Me too.
You wouldn’t believe how small it is in person. I was shocked. So much happened there and yet, just…well wow. It really makes a person stop and think. You’re a history buff right? You would love it.
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It’s scary ’cause he’s there! Ooo, that was mean…
I particularly am interested in the Mexican War, actually. Small, huh? I am surprised! We should stage a play fight there.
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So you aren’t a fan? I’ve never read one word of his if you can believe it. I saw a movie once…yucketh. 😉 Oooo, maybe that was meaner…
Really? Lot’s around here in the subject. Yeah, small, but still held at reverence because of what happened there, ya know.
We should…the one you’ve been acting out in your mind. How to attack Audith so she turns the sword on herself….I’ll get some red scarves so I can allow them to billow out of my chest after I fall to the ground. You can fall to your knees, a crying mess, for dramatic effect.
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I enjoy laughing at his movies. Never read a book either. 🙂
The professor wouldn’t fall to his knees crying? Is that Hector-ish?
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But they are scary movies…you laugh? Of course you do… lol See another wonder, Duke.
Hahaha. No not at all which is why I wrote it that way.
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Well, I laugh at The Shining the most. I try not to, really Audith. But I can’t help it.
Hmm…more like I’d let out a roar.
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*laughing* Yeah…totally creeps me out. No problem if you like the movies. I just can’t handle getting freaked out. Aud, would never sleep and wonder about a brightly lit house looking for rainbows, unicorns, and dragons just to stay calm.
A roar?? Of victory?! DUKE!
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But dragons can be scary…
Of course! Why not?
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Maybe for a princess…
A roar because you are victorious? Duke you are vicious. lol *she grabs her heart*
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Viciousness can be nice. Let’s go for a ride on my chariot. We can hunt lions.
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*smiles big and offers her hand* I’ve been waiting for this chance. Where do we find the lions, Duketh?
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Out in the desert by the pyramids.
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Oooo, we’re gonna see pyramids? *can hardly wait*
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Had a feeling a twist was coming at the end, but I kept thinking it would be about pirates.
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Pirates? How interesting. Now I must read it again.
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Mention of a crew and being demanding.
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Yes, as soon as I read crew I was where you went. Haha.
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OH! Lovely, and don’t you just love that new car smell!! xxxx
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Yeah..the smell and power of the new car created a bit of poetry.
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Fun ride! What color is it?
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Hi, it’s white. I had three colors to choose from and I didn’t like the idea of black or grey. Yeah it should be fun to have around.
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Clever! Like this one a lot!
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Thanks…its a great new car! I’m dying to drive it some more.
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