Today
Rain
Beating
Warm window panes
Thank you
For washing away
Yesterdays misery
Cleaning up life’s mess
The power you possess
Quenching
All that is green
Life’s beauty
Creating pastels
Finding a way
Allowing
Crimson colors
To spread
Oh what you do
For the living
What it means
To me
the rain truly washes away stuff. π one more lovely one from you
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Aww..I’m glad you liked it. π
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Hmmmm..death, mistakes, do-overs, life..the cycle continues. Very nice π .
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Thanks!! Your poem is better…makes much clearer sense.
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Poem..what poem..I don’t do poems. That’s why I read your blog. π
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Beautiful word picture, Audrey.
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Thank you, Susan. π Still raining. π¦
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You are blessed, though, because you walk in the Son light.
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Now that is worth hearing, Susan. π Thank you
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I dunno about you, but when I meet a believer for the first time my heart rejoices.
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π π
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Incidentally my youngest daughter’s middle name is Rain (okay, I’m half-hippie I guess)…. I enjoyed the poem today π
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This poem spoke to you, Kenneth. I love that! (A hippie in some way we all are…)
Thank you. I have the biggest smile. So glad you liked it.
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I love the ideas here. Rain washes away all the filth of day. Nice. Wish I had rain. π I’m stuck with dadblame snow! When’s your BD in March, Audith? I’m sure you told me. But I do forget.
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Exactly right, Duketh. I wish rain for you, as well. I’m not sure snow has the same effect. It is beautiful though…we could go sledding. Watch you bounce around down the hills. I would love to laugh like that today. 9th
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Go falling off, too! Would be fun. The 9th? Cool.
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Yes..falling for sure. One should hold on tightly!! Or a snowman you will become.
Cool…snow? Yes it is.
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Now I want it to rain here. Preferably warm rain because it’s still bitter cold.
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LOL I’m sorry it’s still cold, Charles. Will it ever end? Its kinda cold here. Spring has to be somewhere…
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Supposed to warm up by tomorrow, but a quick warmth tends to lead to head and chest colds. Can’t win.
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Amazing AD, I wish you keep going like this forever π beautiful π
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Thank you, AB. There really is nothing like the rain. The symbolism is gorgeous. π
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Love and live by metaphors AD, thank you π
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Well I do like to add something to my poems for those who enjoy seeing two sides. I guess it worked for you. Well done, Audrey. π I love writing poetry. A place where anything is possible.
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Well done AD π very well done π
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Thank you π
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You are most welcome π have a wonderful day π
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Umm. This is my blog and I get the last comment. Keep that up and this will last forever. Move along… π
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Let’s see π
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