I’m aware of you
A heart I hear beating
Loud and true
Da dum
Da dum
Da dum
Working its way through
I’ve waited for the words to appear
Emotions floating
I reach up to tame them
Placing all in their rightful places
I hear your drum
I sense your need
Da dum
Da dum
Da dum
I have urges too
To be the best
All for you
A Muse
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
Now you really have me wondering just who is the muse you keep referring to in your poems?
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I think that is a wonderment of many, Sir, myself included. Sometimes it can be as simple as my sisters, maybe a comment made inside someone’s post or a voice that speaks louder than I do. I assume they are my muse often. Currently, I can tell you in complete honesty, that I have no idea who he/she is they remain faceless. Do you have experience in utter fractiousness of your own writings? Maybe it’s just me. Hope I answered your question and thanks for asking.
~Audrey
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You put a lot of thought into that poem. I like it.
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Thanks, Susan. Great to see your comment. 🙂
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😀
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“I have urges too
to be the best”
I couldn’t figure out if those two lines were connected or separate……. 🙂
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I think they go well either way, but if you know me they go together….probably.
*shaking her head* Gutter.
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Hey! I wasn’t implying ANYTHING…. merely wondering :p
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😯 My bad….I don’t believe you.
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I feel like with some of your lines you have a secret (or not so secret) double entendre and you’re waiting to see if anyone notices…..and then innocent me comes along and notices that something may be afoot…and well…. that is all I have to say 😉
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Would you stop knowing everything? 🙂 Yes, this is a message to my sisters that I am in fact writing the story I told them I would write. Okay, sit back and be proud of yourself, Mr. J. 😛 Brilliant. ..but stop. 😉
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I don’t know EVERYTHING….i must admit, I’m not very good at algebra 2 and advanced mathematics….. but regarding everything else okay… perhaps 😛
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Show off…I stink at math but people…I get.
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But wasn’t it good?
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Yes it was good……I feel like you are the type of person that is secretly writing 50 Shades of Grey but when people meet you they would never know (although I’ve never read the book so I don’t really know what its about)
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Really?? LOL Well, I’m very human, but I need to be able to look my father in the eye. I am shy shy shy one on one. That’s why I love eye contact so much. In a group I tend to steal the show a bit and it comes through here sometimes.
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Oh and I think you have read the book…
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Ha ha nope….I haven’t. I read the first page at the bookstore and it just seemed like something I wouldn’t be into……
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Yeah, from what I’ve read it doesn’t leave much to the imagination. I prefer the creativity that comes with using my mind. Great writers allow us that privilege.
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“yeah, from what I’ve read…”
And I’m sure YOU have read it 😉
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Give me some credit
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Lol
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And BTW, the fact that my writing creates a notion that I’m capable of writing 50 Shades just proves what my beautiful mind can do for you…you can thank me anytime. 🙂 Yes, I just said it…I’m cocky like that… 😉
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BTW, I read the nice post that the person wrote about you the other day….twas kind of her 🙂
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You did? Thank you! She told me ahead of time but man was I surprised by her words.
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Nice! I like the “da dum” part. It’s almost like a chorus. Very musical, Audith.
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Thanks! You know I like music and I’m glad you made the connection. Da dum is the heart’s music. More musings…
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I know you like music! It’s good when the poem flows like that.
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Are you yelling at me? 😉 *smirk*
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No! I’m just a very enthusiastic person. Sorry. 🙂
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I was just joking with you. I love your enthusiasm. Wouldn’t change a thing! 🙂
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😀
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Such a passionate heart!!
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Yes 🙂
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I agree beautiful! xxxxxxx
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I’m so glad you liked it, Willow. Hugs to you!! xxxxxxxx
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🙂
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Curiouser and curiouser, you definitely need to see my post today 🙂 brilliant poem…but absolutely positively weird for me 🙂
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Your poem was brilliant, I agree. Thanks for sending me over there to see it.
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That was not the point AD 🙂 you always come around 🙂
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🙂 AB, I think it’s great.
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Do you like my poem, AB? I hope you are okay.
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I am very well and I definitely liked your poem 🙂
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Good 🙂 It just surprised you then?
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It was a pleasant surprise 🙂 thank you 🙂
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That’s never happened before, I’m glad it was you. 🙂
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🙂
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Perhaps it’s just me overthinking this… 🙂
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It has me wondering too…
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Oh, Audrey–that is beautiful. 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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