She shines among them,
strongest of petals, feared.
Proud of who she is,
beauty of her spirit, revealed. Confidence will outshine,
Those who needed to see,
her fail.
She shines among them,
strongest of petals, feared.
Proud of who she is,
beauty of her spirit, revealed. Confidence will outshine,
Those who needed to see,
her fail.
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
Thank you!
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Always good to outshine those who came to see her fail. Serves em right.
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Man – doesn’t it!?
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Yes it does.
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🤓
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Shine on strong ! Beautiful.
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Thanks so much ♡
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💜💜💜💜
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♡
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Is this a camelia, Miss A?? ‘Tis splendid, you know. I, too, am puzzled by your final two lines. I suspect there’s more going on than you’ve chosen to reveal and that’s okay — I just hope you’re back to that confident, shining place again!
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I’m confident. I’m unsure of where I’m going but I do know I’m excited to get there. Thank you
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I’ve missed seeing you, Miss A. Hope you’re back for good now!!
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Hope so, too
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Audrey, this poem exudes confidence but seems to show doubt at the last line. Am I reading it incorrectly? Hope you are doing as well as the first five lines indicate.
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Oh, there is so much doubt there, my friend. Exudes sadness if you listen. ♡
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