I
love
love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
its been all I can think about,
it’s all I knew to say,
it’s all my fault,
I’m to blame.
i could have just said,
i want to sleep with you.
can i climb in.
goodnight.
thank you, for seeing me.
i wish i could feel your touch.
tell me you’re pleased.
If I had known this is what you were prepared to hear…
I would have.
Because now, I’m just scared.
*once broken, surrendering love is never easy, but then sometimes thats all there is, an existence arrives and so we do.
Beautiful, vulnerable, and raw – a lovely piece of writing, Audrey. Sending hugs, my friend…
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Hugs to you, as well, my friend
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This is a beautiful poem, raw, real.
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Thank you for reading. I appreciate it.
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Love is such a difficult road. ❤
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It is, Eric. However, it’s most important love exists. ♡
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Absolutely
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♡
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Lovely, “Maybe that’s all there is, Only love”
“love is a longing kiss
love is a leap of faith
love is hand in hand
love is a landing place
Love can make you laugh
love can make you sing
Love’s at the broken heart
Of everything” ……….. David Francey
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Like the poem.
I avoid YouTube since it was taken over the Google. “Come in, control.” The image called to mind this:
SIGN
Eat the stale rôle
Find a new world
They said
I stood at the end of the road
The sign pointed south
I turned east
The sign pointed east
I turned north
The sign pointed north
I turned west
The sign pointed west
I climbed the signpost
As a blind man a white stick
There was no more time
And only the alley was blind
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I liked your poem, all roads lead to Rome
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🙂
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🙂
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🙂 Indeed
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There really is nothing better than the heart of a poet. Positive of it. Thank you, Ben.
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This is beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing it here, Ivor
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Always my pleasure, and I’m glad you liked it, David France is a great great singer/songwriter from Canada 🍁
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Worth noting. 🙂
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beautiful.
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Thanks so much, Gary
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Welcome.
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Resonating with this, Audrey. I know….
💓
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Much love, my friend.
Thank you ♡
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Always fun to be in love. Nice one Audrey.
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Smiles. In love with the idea of getting to be in love. Thank you, John.
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Wonderful piece…know you are loved by those who know your selfless heart and spirit!
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So kind of you, Wendell. I appreciate your supporting the vulnerability I share.
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A powerful piece of writing, Audrey. “…sometimes that’s all there is, an existence arrives and so we do.” Moments in life where we take a step forward and let the world see who we are.
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Randall, thank you for sitting near. Means a lot to me. Exactly. Stepping forward and finding peace in the knowing we did so.
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” an existence arrives and so we do.”
Yep.
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Smiles. Thank you, Ben
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🙂
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Audrey, this is hopeful and wonderful. Don’t be scared – or at least understand – so is he. Sometimes arriving is the only very good place to be.
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Thank you for your lovely comment, Shari. Acceptance has always been a difficult one for me.
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