praying seems simple
but what do we pray for,
the healing to continue?
even when every single day
is tough
maybe we pray for an end
of suffering, yet
I can’t fathom
world’s apart or dust to dust,
so here I am
upon knees, head bowing
please, it’s your will,
please.
and my loved one,
my inner child screams.
Audrey, this is very powerful, and eloquently written. Reading comments – I too believe the best prayer is “thy will be done”, followed by prayers of gratitude. (Or maybe gratitude must come first?)
Thoughts and prayers for that child within.
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Gratitude coming first is an ideal state. Your opinion and insight is welcome, Betty. You offered an important piece. Thank you.
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Thank you for offering this song. Ben. A first for me. Something about his voice soothes.
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The performer I saw live more than any others, Sadly he has passed now. This song seemed relevant.
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I think truly entering a state of prayer is very difficult, requiring great effort and concentration. Sometimes the best I can do is to try to listen. I hope your inner child is heard, Audrey.
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Shari, you’re correct. Prayer can be a difficult place to sit in, especially when a mind is racing. Thank you ♡
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I pray for others, I pray for lost souls and I pray for strength and guidance. I’m pretty sure it helps.
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I adore your “pretty sure”. Whether your pretty sure is laced with a smidgen of doubt or load of surety, I’ve been in both places within seconds of each other. Thanks, Dan
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Personally, I’m positive when I’m making the request. Sometimes, I have to ponder the response as to it’s meaning.
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I’m a BIG believer in prayer, Poetess. We might not get the answer we hope for; we might not get anything other than “wait.” Still, I know God loves me and intends the best for me (whether I think it’s best or not!). And as long as I’m trying to discern His Will — and follow the path He leads — life is a pretty good place.
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So true. So true, Debbie. Thank you ♡
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I have found great comfort in prayer. I really don’t ask for anything but do fortify my beliefs that she listens and that seems to be enough.
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Thank you, John. I agree, the listening is enough.
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Were her voice to call, it would always be heard but a prayer of thanks is always a good start.
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Knowing she will be heard, is an important piece, for sure, C. And plays into my insecurities of never feeling worthy enough. Prayer of gratitude is a good place to start, as well. Thank you for sitting near.
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Always ma’am.
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This reminds me of the novel, ‘Silence’ by Shusaku Endo. The themes there are slightly different, but still the same, if you get what I’m saying. I think you may have watched the movie. It’s very well written Audrey. It’s strange too, because I was thinking of writing something along these lines today, but then changed my theme.
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Nitin, I’ve never heard of this novel, but I’ll keep it in mind. I’ve been inundated with death, and sorrows as of late, and this poem flew through me this morning as I tried to reason with loss. Acceptance of life and death whether we’re ready or not. Many times the words that come through me aren’t meant for me or about me. Those are the times when sharing my poems are of most importance. Maybe this is intended to have you reconsider your decision not to write your own version.
Thank you for telling me your thoughts today, Nitin. ♡
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It is also a Martin Scorsese film, but I haven’t watched the movie, and I don’t know how many movies give books their due justice. I myself have been flooded with thoughts of death. My sorrow comes and goes, but I can’t deny its existence. I often feel very apathetic too, and my hunt for solitude is not always promising. I’ve honestly been through hell, the last few weeks, and I hope I can put a lot of the nonsense that happened behind me and move on. I might write my own version. It’s difficult though because the very act of praying is something that I hardly ever do. I do hope though, even though my views are verging on nihilism with each passing day. And thank you for your post Audrey. It made me think about a lot of things.
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I’ll be praying for you. I want you to release what burdens you so, Nitin. You have a beautiful creative soul. I’ve seen it flourish and want it for you again. Let me know if I can help, please.
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Contact. If you’re okay with that. And we’ll talk. And thank you for your kind words.
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It’s a subject that fascinates me and always has, and i often wonder what people pray for or who they pray to if someone or anyone or anything is the focus.
Audrey, this is fine indeed.
Big Hugs
jf
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This subject is near and dear to my heart, as well, jf. I always come back to His Will being done. I understand there are many different versions of the one, and I can accept that with a lot of joy in my heart. Belief in a higher power is of my concern. I don’t want anyone to be left thinking they have no one. It just can’t possibly be the case. Or love wouldn’t exist at all.
jf, it is always lovely to have you read me. Much love and hugs to you.
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