breath of sunshine
winter so fair
snowflakes blow
as tumbleweeds,
and there are daisies
in her hair.
verdant questions
if maybe
itβs too soon
to come
as soil stays wet
and warm from the sun.
seasons appear
surprising, yet
as they are,
so we love them
regardless, of when
why or how far.
she stands in a wrap
of clover, murmurs,
spring, come soon
upon a window clear.
her breath becomes fog,
laying her finger there.
conveniently
a marriage
of poetry π
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My words and thoughts thank you for your attendance. Giggle π
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Evokes a new relationship with all the promised of spring and love. What a romantic you are – glad to see you feeling upbeat, Audrey.
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Loved the last stanza. (I think it could be called a stanza)
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The last stanza is where the poetry lives, John. You found it. Thank you β‘
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I was right on stanza? Okay then.
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Yes, for sure. Could have said couplet or canto for example, but stanza is perfect for my brain.
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Oh….canto…uh…… couplet got it.
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Stanza is perfect. π
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*trips over the stool* You sure? Okay then.
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Teeheehee. *tosses another in your path*
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π
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stunning
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Oh, Susan. Thank you..
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“a wrap of clover”…lovely!
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Thank you for saying so, Hollie
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It’s true. A beautiful poem !
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Thanks! I believe you. π
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this is so Magical, so full of hopeful romance and childlike delight. So full of YOU π
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Thank you, Poetess. Well, now you’ve caused me to tear up. Sweet of you to say.
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I shared this on my Facebook page as well π
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You’re so kind. Thanks a bunch!
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couldn’t resist!
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You’re a good Pal, Ma’am.
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I thought this poem was really about a bride until I expanded the photo and realized that’s a statue out front! Your words are lovely, Audrey — peaceful, hopeful, wistful. I appreciate the grandeur of an immense cathedral, but there’s nothing quite like a small country church for feeling at home.
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I always enjoy reading about how my poems are viewed and understood by those who read them. I was driving to a wrestling meet in Northeast Nebraska when this little one popped up to saw hello through the foggy conditions. Glad you liked this, Debbie. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Ah you ole romantic you! I felt this one! Reminded me of those gorgeous Russian fairy tales about Winter Princesses and I loved the photo also. TALENT SISTER xo
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When I wrote this morning, I wasn’t sure where the poem was headed. I’m quite happy with her lyrics. I am a romantic. A very shy one. Can’t help myself. I do adore winter. Your imagery is romantic…look at you! I am a sucker for a fairytale. Lovely thoughts, Candice. *blush* Thank you β‘
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I’m a romantic also so I concur and applaud your direction whole heartedly! (I’m shy too so I totally get it) xo equal sucker over here *waves* xo
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*waves* Look at us. Just as normal as can be. xo
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HA HA HA HA! π (big grin)
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Giggle. You have an equally perfect smile and laugh. Glad I could see those, Candice.
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