Abundant living
Choices everywhere
There’s only one me; one human being: you, singular
And its unrealized, we’re all dazed.
Take care of you, I’ll protect me. Life unpredictable. Created perfectly. Alone, but with need and love to give.
Yes, I believe that must be what I’m saying, C. You have no idea….
(Understand my tone by watching my facial expressions…slight wiggle of my nose, watch the right side lift up and then back down, enjoy my strong eye contact, as I spin on my heal and giggle walking away.) Smarty pants! xoxo
Well that didn’t work. My finger got in the way..let me finish.
Abundant living
Choices everywhere
There’s only one you
And you don’t even realize.
You. Lovely. You.
The essence of the poem was realize how great “you” are and settle for nothing short of just what you deserve. I really believe people lack the esteem to realize how great a person they are.
Then I messed with them poem and took it into a different level. Almost mocking which is unlike me. Shows my disappointment at the time I was writing. I’m not one for sarcasm ever, and this turned into one of those…wake up and look around people poems. Maybe it’s the perverbial snap out of it I needed. Sometimes the poetry I write surprises me. Hope you didn’t hurt your head trying to figure this out. Anymore, my blog should come with a warning label.
Thanks for taking the time to read my poem. I am grateful for the visit. Always. xx
Thank you for your honest words, C. I’m truly humbled by your comment. You’re quite kind and allowed a blushing, it seems.
Something tells me you watch with just enough time to swoop in and fix the problem. People are lucky to have a big brother in you. Nothing gets by you, it seems.
A mesh of feelings wrapped into a poem not even a drunk person can decipher, unless one has been there. Realize how wonderful you are, I say. Thank you, Ma’am.
A refreshing bubble bath comes to mind.
And a bottle of Jack. Chuckles
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My car got the bubble bath. I needed the Jack. Hi, Jay. Something tells me you’ve had opportunities to bubble and bath and Jack.
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’tis truth
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Had to read this several times. Sorry for being late to the party.
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Hi, C. This poem is proof of a scattered existence, I think. When it began it read like this:
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So the secret to good poetry is to start with eh? You are full of surprises. (Hear that intoned in a dry, even voice by a smart aleck.)
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Yes, I believe that must be what I’m saying, C. You have no idea….
(Understand my tone by watching my facial expressions…slight wiggle of my nose, watch the right side lift up and then back down, enjoy my strong eye contact, as I spin on my heal and giggle walking away.) Smarty pants! xoxo
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Don’t forget the finger…
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Huh, and to think I took you for the kind of guy who wouldn’t need me to go so far. For the record, that isn’t usually my style. 😉
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Well that didn’t work. My finger got in the way..let me finish.
Abundant living
Choices everywhere
There’s only one you
And you don’t even realize.
You. Lovely. You.
The essence of the poem was realize how great “you” are and settle for nothing short of just what you deserve. I really believe people lack the esteem to realize how great a person they are.
Then I messed with them poem and took it into a different level. Almost mocking which is unlike me. Shows my disappointment at the time I was writing. I’m not one for sarcasm ever, and this turned into one of those…wake up and look around people poems. Maybe it’s the perverbial snap out of it I needed. Sometimes the poetry I write surprises me. Hope you didn’t hurt your head trying to figure this out. Anymore, my blog should come with a warning label.
Thanks for taking the time to read my poem. I am grateful for the visit. Always. xx
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So ya started with nothing and then made this reply appear eh?
I found it beautiful and thought provoking. Some things you read just stick with you I suppose.
One of my greatest is watching the Devil get people distracted, getting their eye off of what matters and what they should see or pay attention to.
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Thank you for your honest words, C. I’m truly humbled by your comment. You’re quite kind and allowed a blushing, it seems.
Something tells me you watch with just enough time to swoop in and fix the problem. People are lucky to have a big brother in you. Nothing gets by you, it seems.
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Big difference between someone learning a lesson and getting hurt ma’am.
Thank you
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Yes, Sir. Like I said, you are a rarity. One to be cherished.
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Thank you ma’am.
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I connect with this so powerfully. Beautifully evocative and honest. 🙂 Love it!
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A mesh of feelings wrapped into a poem not even a drunk person can decipher, unless one has been there. Realize how wonderful you are, I say. Thank you, Ma’am.
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🙂 As Are You Dear Poetess 🙂
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Thank you, Ma’am
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When each feels confident to be their own true self, somewhere there is a loving place to share.
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How important it is to recognize one’s worth and to hold it near and dear. So true, Shari.
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“You take care of you.” Great line. “I’ll take care of me.” Even better
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Thanks, John. Hope your week has started off well.
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For me any start is good. 😀
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Me, too 🙂
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Ha ha ha.:-)
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♡
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