I feel you beautiful,
I see you you
Complete.
I notice me functionary,
I weep weep for me.
I see you you,
as me should be
I feel you. Beautiful.
I see you you
Within me.
Weep functionary,
Weep weep for me,
I feel you, Beautiful.
I see you you;
Me, as me should be,
Complete.
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
Lovely
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It felt like it told me I’m complete already, but spent lots of time looking elsewhere. Beautiful.
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Thank you for taking the time to read. Yes, you’re correct…a bit of “if one could only realize”.
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We’re often the last to see the good stuff within us.
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You’re correct, Eli. Thank you for reading my poetry.
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My pleasure Audrey – you have a way of expression I really dig.
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So glad you connect, Eli. I need to come by for a visit. You’ve been very gracious with your comments.
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I’m missing you again, dear friend. Waiting for you but missing you.
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Thank you for checking on me. It was a long summer, however, I exhaled and found my smile. Means a lot to know you’re checking in on me. ♡
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I like to know you’re smiling. ❤
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I’m smirking mostly. Wandering where I go from here. Love ya.
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You’ll find your way – you always choose well and I believe in you. One step in front of another.
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Thankful for your support, Shari
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It seems that we can see so much of ourselves in the world around us ~ pieces of things we would love to be, perhaps not understanding it is all within our reach…and then you finish it with just this thought: “I feel you, Beautiful. I see you you; Me, as me should be, Complete.” Perfect poem for this perfect day, cheers to the day Audrey 🙂
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Dear Dalo, your a constant pleasure to find. Thank you for being here. Hope all is well with you.
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Gee, I thought I’d already commented on this one, but I don’t see anything, so I’ll try again. Wonder why I can’t remember what I said the first time??
This one is hauntingly beautiful in a circuitous sort of way, Audrey. You’ve got a LOT going on in here but not a lot of different words to express it. What comes through clearly, though, is the hopeful tone. Hang in there — things WILL get better!
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Thank you, Debbie. Time is my friend. Healing through writing helps. Thanks for your support.
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But don’t weep too much, I say.
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I don’t believe I’ll weep. Ruins my smile, Duketh.
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after a good weep
for you
a cleansed
smile remains 🙂
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I adore the positivity you provide. Hugs
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Wonderful!
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So sweet, Billy. Thank you
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beautiful my friend, good to have you back!
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Thank you, Neha
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Good to see your poetry around here again. I felt that this poem was a kind of dance. A sad dance while thinking of something that’s missing.
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Hi, Gus. Yeah, I was questing to find my ” I’m okay button”. Hope you’re doing okay. Good to say hello.
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Just reminded me that we will be someday complete.
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Indeed. Continued prayers for you, Susan.
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I love this Audrey. Truly love it. It’s beautiful and oh so eloquent.
Tons of love and many blessing, my friend.
🙂 ❤
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Thank you, my friend. Much love to you, as well
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🙂
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A complete me is all we can hope to have. Nice poem, Audrey. (I would like to find a you,you to weep for me, me.)
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You always amaze me, Sir.
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Aren’t you the sweetest.
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Hope so.
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I love the Beautiful chaos in your words. The heartfelt pain that seems to be circling, but then Light shines in, briefly. The circular motion of the words mirrors the emotion until the reader feels the turmoil for themselves. Powerful Prose, my friend.
{{{{hug}}}} You ARE Beautiful….just reminding 😉
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Aww. I’m thankful you see the beauty in chaos. You’re so sweet.
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LOL I live the beauty of chaos LOL 🙂 Hoping you’ve been well.
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LOL I’m doing well thank you for asking.
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Audrey, this one made my heart ache. You are masterful at weaving words in and out, repeating yet enhancing the meaning at each iteration, creating a spiral effect . The photo with its repeated circle motif echoes the sentiment of the poem.
A mournful tone to this one, regretting loss. But also hopeful at the end, seeing what is possible and realizing it’s there.
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The ending found a way of showing me the positive light needed to see all is obtainable and welcome in my life. Thankful you spend the time to write of my poetry so beautifully. In awe of you, my friend.
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