My friend, Jacqui, gives solid advice on writing every day on her site, Worddreams. Her tips, as an editor and accomplished author, have often helped me strengthen my writing. I’m humbled with her mention of my poetry today and during April’s National Poetry Month. Her gift this morning brings a shine to my eyes and fuel to my journey. Thank you, Jacqui. ♡
Poetry is not something I’m good at writing so I enjoy it vicariously through online friends like Audrey Dawn of Oldest Daughter and Red-headed Sister. I’ve been following her for several years and always find her poetry startlingly personal, quick peeks into a world ruled by emotion and heart. I’m way to structured for that so only enjoy it through someone else’s eyes.
To honor April’s National Poetry Month, here are fifteen tips from those who have no trouble delivering this concise-but-pithy form of writing:
- avoid cliches. Too often, they are unoriginal thoughts on a subject. Instead of using these pre-packaged descriptions, create your own. For example: Instead of
Hard as nails
use
Hard as _____________________
- rhyme with caution. It can become singsong. Beginners are (surprisingly) more likely to find success with free verse.
- describe something or someone–no plot necessary. Unless you’re writing Narrative Poetry or an epic…
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Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
Hello,
I am excited to say the least
I found a new form of poem
of which I had never heard,
It came on the back of a bird.
Energised by a poetic beast,
I have been trying and plying
Altering the flow until it clicked,
Now it’s a go.
A Cleave you see is a poem of three,
read left and right and across the page
There is one for him and you and me.
I’ll let you read while quaffing tea.
A funny introduction I’m sure you’ll agree, but press my link and see what I see.
https://ellenbest24.wordpress.com/2016/04/01/the-arrogance-of-eleanore/
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A wonderful way of introducing yourself!! Thank you for the honor, Ellen. I enjoyed your poem very much. Enjoy your day!
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Who’s that red head strutting around with her eyes all a-shine?
Bet she’s writing a new poem.
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Laughing!! She probably told you she was surprising me with this post, Missy. I’ve got a few under my hat tonight. Thanks for making me giggle. ♡
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Great advice, Audrey. Thank you for posting this! I took a lot of what was written to heart. 🙂 ❤
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I did too, Amy. Jacqui has been in the writing business a long time. Blessed to be able to learn through her journey. Glad you can too. Hugs!!!
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Gee, I think I’d better stick to novels! So many of these rules are things I learned in school and seem to violate regularly. Sigh. ‘Tis hard writing at all, isn’t it??
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Girl, don’t you dare quit!!! Have you read my poetry…one has a long leash when writing. You sit down and enjoy the process. Hear me?! ♡♡♡♡♡
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You are much too generous and kind, Miss Audrey — does my heart good to hear your encouragement, thank you very much!!
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You’re welcome, D. Love ya! ♡
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Right back atcha, Poet!!
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Thanks for the reblog, Audrey.
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You’re welcome!
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I’m always amazed–with reblogs–how the post reaches so many new people with great insights. I especially like Morgan’s–that these are innate tips. Exactly what I tried to list.
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Morgan is a talented poetess, Jacqui. She writes eloquently and understands writers quite well.
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This is wonderful and so true, although most is innate to me, I do often remember that this gift I value and adore is not always so natural to others. I particularly appreciate “rule #2”, Be careful to Rhyme only some of the time! 😉
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Very nice. Ironically, this also helps me understand how to read poetry. I should say remember, I actually studied poetry a little bit (two courses) in college.
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If you like learning new things then Jacqui is your girl. She’s awesome and does a great job explaining a writer’s world. Ups and downs. I knew you had a background in poetry in some way. Thrilled to have been able to keep your attention with mine. Jacqui has also helped me become a stronger writer in many areas. No foolin’!
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I’ve brushed up against my poetry experience a few times Audrey but some day, I need to explain it a little better. If you want to read one post where I’ve come close, I’d suggest this one: http://nofacilities.com/2013/06/16/if-you-can-read-you-can-do-anything/
I admire poets, very much, and I really enjoy your poetry.
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I left quite a lengthy response on your post, Dan.
Just part of my response is found here
…In response to your few classes in poetry, I think most Renaissance men like you can hold your own due to intimidating classes such as those. Heck, I could tell you stories of all the literature and poetry classes I sat through, but I’d be hard pressed to admit any of them taught me how to write poetry. Reading poetry taught me to write poetry. I think you dad sounds amazing. Would have loved having a mentor such as him. You’re a blessed man, my friend.
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He was extremely important to me, Audrey. All the classroom learning combined doesn’t stack up to the lessons I had at his side.
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Love reading that your parent was the best teacher you had, Dan. As it should be.
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I feel the same way, Morgan. I’m thankful every day to be heard and known as a poet. Giggle. We rhyme without even trying. A sure sign of poetic tendencies.
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I don’t know how my reply ended up down there… *points down there* Please forgive me.. 🙂
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LOL WordPress snafu #2462732ey654654w22 🙂
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Oh, is that all? 😉
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