Finished Sunday
With a cool sea breeze
Monday morning offers
A refocused reality
You can relax, Sunshine
I don’t want
What isn’t meant for me
Finished Sunday
With a cool sea breeze
Monday morning offers
A refocused reality
You can relax, Sunshine
I don’t want
What isn’t meant for me
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
So strong, Red. Great ending here. Wow.
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I appreciate you thinking so…I try. Thanks for reading, my friend. xx I got a Wow…awesome. 🙂
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Great last two lines. Unexpected. There are times when sunshine is not the right solution.
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Thank you, Jacqui. And times where sunshine needs reminding to relax and let whatever be.
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A truthful yet sad poem, almost a perfect thing for a Monday (and a Tuesday and week tat feels like many Mondays) ~ it is another longing poem, but this one has a very noble sense to it in telling the sunshine to relax, knowing it will return again but wishing it never to leave (even with sunburned skin!). Cheers to a great week Auddie.
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“Just another manic Monday…” Good morning, Sunshine 😉 (Do I get to blame you for my sunkissed legs. Ouch.) I do look forward to so much of what a new week promises. I enjoy that word “noble”. Cheers to you, Handsome. xx
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Yeah, don’t forget the sunscreen
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Tis beautiful today, Butch. My legs are a tad sunburned. Fair skin is quite temperamental.
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I know old Sol. Sometimes he looks like he’s sleeping and then wham. 3rd degree.
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Haha. Yeah, he thinks he’s fun. 😦
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I want to fly like that… beautiful!
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Me, too. So cool, huh? Smiles.
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Some bright morning…
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Is he refusing to shine? Spank him, I say!
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The sun? Umm, I don’t think so, but I will spank him if I catch him!
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What’s the last line mean?
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Has to do with fate and destiny. Most of us don’t want what isn’t truly meant for us, I think. I mean, I don’t want someone who doesn’t want me, if that makes sense. I want what is fated to be mine. That effortless connection that time and space has a way of bringing into our life. I simply want what is designed for me. I don’t mind working for it…if that’s what is required. My thoughts were…relax, whomever is worried, I don’t want what isn’t mine. Does that make sense?….a whole lotta stuff out of a few simple words. See how I ramble? Best to keep my thoughts short and precise, if I can…or else I sound dumb.
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That’s how cool your poetry is…one line has that much depth! Cool. I see what you’re saying, and I agree, madam.
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My lines live at the bottom of the gulf, Duke. Not cool at all. You have always understood my rambling. Glad you agree.
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It’s so funny that you don’t like your own poetry. That’s good.
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I just can’t believe I wrote it. And that anyone likes it, more than anything…
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Hey, I get the same feelings, too. But believe me, it’s enjoyed.
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I know you get the same feelings. And I try to assure you that you shouldn’t. Thank you, Duketh. ♡
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Into each life some rain must fall, right? At least you can be comforted by Sunday’s beauty.
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Indeed, Debbie. However, relaxing into what will be is so very comforting. Grab your joy and dance, I say. ♡
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Those who dance, should dance. For me, I think I’ll just write. Or maybe sing alot!!
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Visions appear as the sun sinks
Off in the distance I believe
Your smile comforts me
I strain my eyes
The waves crash to the shore
I look up as a seagull flies
I remember you
As it winks
Or was that you?
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First of all, I love being responded to in verse. You’ve started something I’ll pathetically want more of in the future. You’ve been warned. Giggle. Thank you, Jay. You’ve made my day. Your poem suits this picture better than mine. A proper longing poem. My favorite. And yes, rest assured, that was me winking. I’m very good at it. 😉
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😉 I accept your warning
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Good 😉 And you know how to wink, as well. How nice. Haha. Enjoy your evening.
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You too
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Thank you, Jay
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Maybe, it is meant for you
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Maybe, Rajiv. I just wanted to take the pressure off a new day. What will be will be…and if it is meant for me, then I will continue to feel it in my soul. ♡ So lovely to see you, my dear.
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Blessings ❤
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You deserve those blessings, my friend. Hugs. ♡ ♡ Thank you.
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So do you
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Thank you ♡
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Provocative 🙂
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Yes, if your mind is willing to go there. 🙂 Thanks for coming with me. ♡
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your welcome ❤
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nice
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Thank you…could you smile for me, please? ♡
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