I’m
For you
He made me
For you
He taught me to love
For you
He showed me compassion
For you
He lived perfectly, so I didn’t have to
For you
He loves me as I am
For you
He is patient with me
For you
He is my best friend
For you
He trusts me
For you
He believes in me
For you
He released me
For you
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
That up arrow is a nice touch. 🙂
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Hey…you get an A+ for seeing the arrow, Christopher. Thank you. 🙂 (I feared twas all for not.)
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Whew. I was afraid you might tell me it was something else. 🙂
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Ha. Well, I suppose it looks something like a cross, as John suggested. 🙂
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Instead of looking up to the heavens, it was a cross all along. Well, at least I didn’t guess addition. 🙂
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No…tis an arrow! But the cross idea was a nice touch! Your guess of addition would have sent me giggling, for sure!
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Arrow + cross = stairway to heaven?
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Well, Mr. Creative. ..nothing wrong with a little Steppinwolf! (Pretty sure that’s who sings that song…) Awesome thought.
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This is an unexpected poem (of course you do make a habit out of surprising your readers…), it touches on a powerful subject and I really like the repeating lines… In fact, for me it makes the poem that much more powerful, and makes it hold such deep meaning. Well done Audrey Dawn ~ always good to use your full name.
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Unexpected is good, right? I mean, I can’t have y’all falling asleep. (I do like keeping you happy, confused, wondering and invested.) You don’t mind the repeat? Good. I was worried it would come across as annoying. I think I just really wanted to get the point across. Put all queations to rest. I think that’s what most people need in a relationship new or seasoned. I do believe we’re released when put into caring hands, Dalo. Released to allow anything to happen. When you use my full name I feel like your eyes are focused on mine, as if needing me to listen closely. Yes, Master, I’m listening. 😉 I love your wisdom. I’m blessed to have you near. ♡
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Unexpected is very good ~ without it, life would be boring…and you seem to do quite well in the unexpected department Audrey Dawn 🙂 and to keep the wave of compliments flowing ~ it is nice to have your wisdom flow so poetically.
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I hope I stay unexpected for you, Randall Collis. I can use your full name, as well, ya know. I think you just like me flying above the clouds. Tis why you load up on the compliments. I’m on to you. My wisdom is brought to you through poetry, because my prose would kill you by simplicity, length and randomness. That’s no way to go, Dalo. ♡
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Typically, the repeating phrase theme kind of gets me to stop reading, but you actually have a good, powerful point here. It works well. And I thought of doing this kind of poem, too.
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Adam! Thank you…wow. I was just sure it would annoy most. I just felt like it worked…which could have just been me rationalizing with myself. You should do yours, I think.
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I love it! And the shape!
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Aww. Thank you! Its an arrow! But maybe a cross, as well. 🙂
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Passionate, there, Aud.
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Yes, I suppose so, Zak. Tis Valentine’s Day soon, you know. ♡ I have to provide some romance here somewhere.
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This was awesome! And the bird, too. I like birds, you know. I maybe sorta envy them.
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Thank you, Duketh. I like birds, too. I get that from my father, you know. I envy them a lot.
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I didn’t know that. Very cool. Yeah, they can just fly away.
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Where do they fly to, do you suppose?
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These ones? To a nest!
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Hmm, I didn’t see any nests. Wonder where they hide them? And what’s at the nest…
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At the nest? Goose eggs, probably.
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Negative. Not possible. Try again, Duke.
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*laughing* An eagle preparing for an ambush?
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No. No eagles here, sadly. Random and very unlikely…. guess again.
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No eagles?! That’s a bummer.
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No, not usually…a few. But probably not in Galveston. Freshwater is hard to come by there…
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*starts singing Galveston by Glenn Campbell*
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How come you know old songs?! You’re too young to know these…plus I don’t know this song.
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I told you I was old. You don’t know that song?! Haha…
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You’re not old! No..I don’t know the song and you weren’t even born when it was written! I know of Glen Campbell.
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You know of? *shakes head and tsks*
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What? I do…little bits. *looks around* Well, he isn’t that cute, nor does he have a beard.
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He’s always happy, though.
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Which is nice…
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Love the cross. Nicely done.
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I love that you see a cross, John. Thank you! It fits beautifully with the poem. Pay no mind, but I was hoping it looked a bit like an arrow. *giggles*
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Now I see an arrow. I have to admit the cross I saw was the Greek Orthodox symbol. Stay with arrow.
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Arrow it is.. 🙂
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Good
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♡
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Love this!
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Yay! I’m so glad. I wasn’t sure if it came across okay. (For You being too repetitive. ) You’re the best. Thank you, Willow. xx♡
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And you are the best. xxx
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Xxxxx
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Fantastic! Audrey, you’re on a roll — and I’d be ever so grateful if you’d send us some of those blue skies (you can keep the seagulls — they’d find no place to play here!)
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Thanks! I’ll send them right on over. Look for them on Saturday. 🙂 I’m happy to keep’em. Giggle.
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A love poem. Lovely!
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Thank you, Susan. I have to pull out the love poems. Valentine’s Day is only a few short days away.
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Yes, it is. Hubby is already wanting me to open my gift, But I will not.
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Yes, I’m with you. Wait. Drive him nutty. 🙂 Enjoy your Valentine’s Day!
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Thank you, and you too. 😀
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Thanks!!
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Oh Audrey, this is simply Amazing. I LOVE IT 🙂 ❤ 🙂 ❤ 🙂
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Glad you liked it, Morgan. ♡ You’re always so supportive!
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That was really inspiring. Thanks
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You’re welcome, Adrienne. 🙂 Enjoy your day.
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