I wrote of you today,
Adjectives in abundance,
Baby, you amaze me.
And damn,
If I don’t make you look good,
Goin’ down.
5,000 words today.
Put that in the books, y’all, yay!
I didn’t know I had that much to say.
Let alone, for it to come out that way.
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*giggle*( I had to set up that paragraph up like a poem. I didn’t even try to rhyme!! Sublime, truly.)
Peace out! WTHeck! *proudly struts*
Happy Saturday Night… 😉
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
Awesome opening: “I wrote of you today, / Adjectives in abundance,”. Hope you’re having a nice week so far!
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I’m happy you like those lines. I was nothing but whispers when I write this one, Ben. My week’s been great. Just had a class Valentine’s Day party today…talk about a loud day. One more tomorrow for my other group…I may survive. Maybe. 😉
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I’m sure you will 😉 Have a lovely night and lovely tomorrow. Loud can be fun 😉
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Thank you. Yes, loud is fun, indeed. 😉
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5,000 words!!! Nice. Is that for your novel? And you do make the sun look nice.
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I know!!! *jumps into your arms* I couldn’t be more excited! Well, yes! I decided to include a moment I’d been on the fence about, and it went a little beyond my expectations. I wrote some more today, too. Do I look different?
*glows* Thank you, Duketh…the sun needs to look nice, I think. But that isn’t exactly how I explained it, you know.
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You look very happy! So…the novel must almost be done, then…. *wonders*
It isn’t?
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I am happy about it! I haven’t had much time to write, so when I did it just happened. You know, it almost is…but you also know I am not very happy with the draft, so I’m revisiting it. I was too closed off during parts, so I’m rethinking some and that’s what I did a little of this weekend…
I guess it was, actually.
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And…how did that go?
I win, you know.
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It went super. Looking back it definitely belonged and I was fighting its belonging before. My fear is that I’m not interesting enough. *bangs her head*
You win?! What is your prize?
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Well, we both know that that isn’t true. Don’t we?
Umm…I get to see a picture of your mountains again!
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Well, it seems you do, Duketh. The jury is still out on my end.
Okay! With a poem? *giggles* (because that doesn’t sound right somehow…) *blush*
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Audith! You know that’s not the case at all. Don’t tell yourself that is, too.
*laughs* With a poem!
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I’m trying. You know how it can be, Duketh. Once you start reading other works and then go back to your own…we’re like, ” This is crap! Show don’t tell…tis a mess.” I don’t think it’s me just being a perfectionist, either. Ahhh!!! *looks for writing blinders*
*sparkles* Fine… let me think. I have one you’ll like, I believe. Just hold on cause I’m gonna pair it with a Haibun I wrote over the weekend and have been to shy to post. Tis super sad, but it helps explain a bit of my fear. ♡
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But that is normal when one judges one’s own work, for sure. Just don’t think too much on it, I say.
Great! I’ll be excited to see…
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I know its normal. But maybe I don’t like being normal. I sorta want to be supernatural. ..
* sparkles*
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I know…but let Jesus be that for you.
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Yes, Sir. This I know to be true.
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Strut on, my friend — you’ve earned it! Five thousand words is a super accomplishment — break out the chocolate, pour the champagne. Bask in the glow, Audrey!!
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Yay!! Thank you, Debbie. I totally strutted about for a bit. I was so happy with myself. I appreciate your celebrating with me.♡♡
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I love this. 😉
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Hi, Willow. Thank you.. 😉
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I love to watch you strut, Aud. (Verbally that is.) 😉
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That was well done. 😀
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Thank you, Susan. 🙂
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Beautiful sunset and poem.
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I was taken back at how colorful this sunset was, John. Beautiful. Thanks.
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I’m impressed! Congratulations on a job well done.
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Thank you, Dan. I only hope I can continue the pace. The tough part. xx
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Congrats! You deserve a proud strut, a raised wine glass toast, and a big smile for knocking out all those words and feeling great about them. Sounds like a damn good outpouring of words 🙂
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Thank you!! Yes! I am pretty proud of what I accomplished and only beg for the rhythm to continue. The words are incouraging and the portion I ended on was pretty hot. Lovely, in fact. I can’t wait to be done writing and to begin sharing. Wine will be in order and you must be around for the toast. 🙂
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Will the writing be shared on a future blog post? I will certainly raise a glass in toast 🙂
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Well, I’m hoping to share it, but I’m a bit concerned about the content. May be too spicy for my blog. I’d have to do a password protected post, I think. Its a piece from my novel, which is a way to show my range.
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A password-protected post sounds like the way to go with that one. 🙂
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Seems best 🙂
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XD You sound happy! Congrats on the successful day.
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I kinda am… 🙂 *dances like Snoopy* Thank you, Luke!
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wow – beautiful!
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Thank you! The sky was truly magnificent!
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yesss :)))
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Ha! :))) Glad you agree.
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