The inevitability of a goodbye, frozen,
As time allows a winter glimpse.
Your daily vision offered,
A season of gifts.
Leaving me blessed,
Less tortured, I guess.
Knowing you considered me,
Even for a minute,
Noteworthy.
Yet, like the fallen snow,
Upon your branches,
I cling to who you are,
Protective and strong,
As if love could grow.
My one and only,
May you never forget me,
if the wind sends you on.
Look towards your view,
And always, always,
Think of us,
For it is I, who needs you.
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
Audrey,
for me, this is most definitely a winter poem and i’m not talking only about the accompanying picture; there is the sadness of loss here and the longing..but having said that, the writing is fine indeed.
Best always to You
jf
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Hi, jf. Yes, this poem is full of sadness and longing, of which I have an affinity. I blame the reflective moment I was having, as the photo truly deserves a happier tune. Winter is my favorite time of year and I miss it so much. Thank you for reading and for understanding poetry so well.
Much love, jf.
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*doesn’t even know what to say* Audith, this is special. Really special. You should know, I think about you more than that!!! And the professor isn’t going anywhere–promise!
It was funny, when I first saw that, I was like: Hey! That looks real familiar! A lot of snow, huh?
And, Audith, you don’t know how much you mean to me, too, you know.
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Shhh. *puts a finger to her lips* Well, it had to be a longing poem in the end. Tis my mood lately. Aw. I’m glad.
I figured you had no idea you sent it. You’re people really should update you better now that you’re big time! Thanks for the photo, Duketh. I was very surprised to get it, you know. You’re the best. A ton of snow! *green with envy*
Nope, tis true, I don’t. *smiles*
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Longing poems are nice, actually.
No, no…! *laughs* I sent it! It was just funny seeing that picture on here. *sends Audith some snow*
*laughing* Wicked!
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Yes, they’re my favorite. Always. Most romantic of all, I think.
You did not! Liar! *winks* I know better. Yeah, I bet it is. Thanks! *sits in the snow*
*smirk* Yes, of course.
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Romantic? Oh dear.
You know I probably sent it, you know.
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Oh, you know they are, Duke.
I hope you did, you know.
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Yes, you’re right.
I did. I did send it.
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You don’t allow me to be right very often.
You did, but maybe just forgot that you sent it. I’m glad you did, but I think I need a do over.
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I did not forget! Another picture?
Well, there’s only one right…
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Okay. I believe you. Yes, please.
True, but I’m right more than one.
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But, Audith, the snow is all gone.
Nah!
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You did that on purpose, I bet. No problem.
Oh…
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Did not! But it’s all gone. You still want one?
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*laughs* Just teasing you, you know. It seems everyone’s snow is missing. Yes, if you have one you’d like to share.
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Of what, though, I’m thinking. Hmm…I did get a dusting of snow through the night, you know.
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A dusting of snow! See winter isn’t over yet, Duke.
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I fear you’re right.
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*pouts*
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This is just soooo well written, Audrey. I think you captured longing in all its facets. So many wishes… 🙂
Have a wonderful evening!
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Thank you, Luke. A winter longing was achieved then, I suppose? Good…I couldn’t be happier. Ha. You miss nothing. Have a great evening, as well. I hope your practice is going well. Valentine’s day is around the corner. 🙂
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Yeah! 🙂 Practice is coming along… dress rehearsal last night went well for sure.
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Oh, good!
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Even for a minute noteworthy? Pretty humble. I’d look for another gift.
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Well, a matter of understanding is has to be involved, I suppose. Don’t blame the gift. The gift was this photo and it is perfectly beautiful. I miss winter. Blame the words…those are mine and all my fault. ♡
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I thought the gift was the one only giving a minute of noteworthiness.
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What an amazing poetic thought…Unrequited just the same, actually. Very cool.
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Yes. See I’m not just a pretty face when I say time for a new gift.
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Ha. Yes, I trust that pretty face.
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Audrey, this looks much like an Illinois scene, frozen trees and obviously frigid temps. Hauntingly beautiful, in a quiet waiting kind of way, though. I suspect you’re stronger than you fear, dear, and no one in his right mind would ever forget you or blow away in the wind!
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I’m sorry you’re still feeling the cold temps, Debbie. I miss having a true winter experience. Not sure I want it for four months again, but I miss the memories it provides. You’re very sweet, Debbie. Thank you.
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Winter longing can be so sad, Aud. You captured the loneliness of the season.
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Thank you, Mark. Well they say poets write of winter with sadness and longing. I love winter and miss it so… Thanks for your creative eye, my friend.
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Reminds me of the mermaid from yesterday… and like that one, I feel that there’s a strength in the words… of a sadness, but a firm resolution to keep pushing on.
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Gus, your attention to my writing always makes me feel supported. I thank you, from the bottom and all the way to the top of my heart. ♡♡ My poetry has altered a bit, I know. I blame a little confusion and the need to let some dreams go. New dreams await and I am ready.
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I look forward to the poetry that those new dreams create 🙂
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You’re the best. 🙂 xx
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Just chillingly beautiful!
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Thank you, dear Willow. I sorta needed it to be haunting in a way. The picture deserved it. ♡
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Yes yes it did!
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♡ 🙂
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Beautifully written.
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Hiya, Adam. I appreciate you thinking so. It’s nice having you around. Hope your day is shaping up well. Not mounted in too much snow…
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No, the icicles are looking more dangerous…
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Yikes! I always enjoyed a long pointed icicle.
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Here’s a “before” image to remember…they quickly returned.
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Nice!
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Those are powerful words, Audrey Dawn.
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Words spin and spin until they settle, Susan. Thank you.
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Beautifully written Audrey Dawn – If your words are felt in the heart of whomever it was intended, as it was felt within my own, then the wind will never carry them far away from you. Hope your day is as beautiful as your poetry.
Michael
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Thank you, Michael. Writing can be as easy as breathing some days. Your support means a lot, and I’m glad you enjoyed this poem. Enjoy your day. xx
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