Tell me again, but not above a whisper
I am tangled in between every sound
A voice nearly as sweet as hard candy
Persistent as a bumblebee’s clamoring
My words available, however breathless
Upon an ear such as yours, exploited
A curse, even you find hard to ignore
Listen, beauty aches, misunderstood
Though I run every day with the wolves
Feral in every way but two, the deeds
The language of your heart won’t miss
Lay down your poison arrows, fire at will
Tracking control among trees, primal
Murmurs, of wisps cling as they guide
Wolf’s confident charge glazes through
Your spirit soothes, submission, I lack
I ask not for your acquiescence in step
Humility is not a weakness you own
My desire is to hear the song, in part
That I might find this rhythm intoned
I stand forward, shedding perfect layers
My tenacity empowered, of this I know
Underneath layers of cimmerian leaves
Among light, where do amorous women go?
*****
To my surprise, an email from Johnny Ojanpera arrived in my inbox a few days ago with a collaboration request for my consideration. Moments like this one don’t come around often enough. I’ll admit to being rather shocked. Humbled, more appropriately. Johnny thought I’d need to stop and think about whether or not writing with him was an interest?! Umm, yes, please.
My only warning to him, however, was to be careful, as I’d proven to be a bit on the vulnerable side as of late. Yes, this was my attempt at scaring him away. He laughed, which I adored. I guess I don’t frighten Johnny. Living life with a creative wife has him covered in suitable armor, I suppose.
I am pleased with our poem, Johnny, thank you for your lead.
Johnny’s talent speaks for itself and can be found on his blog:Β Johnny Ojanpera ~ The Words I Didn’t Forget.
Johnny proves to be incredibly intelligent, which I admire, and any applause over our effort should be directed towards his poetic ability.
Thanks for making poetry easy, Johnny. β‘
Marvelous. You two work great together! I’ll hope you’ll be interested in a Valentine’s Day collaboration with me and a few other poets. Have a great day!
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Thank you. I’m glad you think so, B. I loved writing with Johnny. He’s an expressive poet and he pushed me, which I needed. I may be, of course…what’s your idea? Thank you. I hope you’re doing well.
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You two work really well together, almost like you’ve done it a million times before. Just a Valentine’s Day collaboration poem. If you want to join in just check my blog. I’m doing pretty well, thanks. I hope the same for you π
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A million times before, huh? Wow. I don’t believe we have, but a sweet compliment. I’ll have a look and read, for sure. Thanks for asking. Glad all is well.
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You’re welcome. It sure seems like you did. That poem was perfectly crafted. Hard to tell it was two people writing it. Good work. Have a lovely evening! Stay warm!
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Very kind of you to say, Benjamin. I appreciate your talented eye. You would know, for sure. You have a lot of experience with collaberation. Thank you.
Stay warm….tis warm here already. South Texas know not much else. You stay warm. Seems you’ve had plenty of takers for the Valentine’s Day collaboration, but if you see a spot where I could contribute. I will.
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An extraordinary collaboration, producing an exciting poem! Well done, both of you, much to read and re-read.
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Thanks, Shari. It was fun writing with someone and Johnny is quick with his words like I am, so it was an ideal collaboration. He did a pretty good job of trying to pull out the junk locked up.
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Titanic collaboration, Red. Way above a murmur.
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Thanks! Love your description, Zak. You’re awesome!
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This was a good one! Johnny and you did perfectly. I felt the emotion.
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Thank you, Duketh. He did all the heavy lifting. He asked me to agrue with him so I did. You always know where to look for a battle. Glad you liked this one. xx
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You do like to battle. But I bet you did some heavylifting as well.
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Yes, I suppose, I do. Not really, the subject matter and title was all Johnny’s idea. Those are the hardest parts of writing sometimes. I just had to bring the emotion.
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Which is very hard, too.
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The hardest is being honest with myself.
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You should try to be, I think.
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I will. β‘β‘ Always.
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I had so much fun writing this, Audrey. I am most famous for not taking hints, and I think that’s why you didn’t scare me away. Your energy is contagious, and it was my pleasure to ‘mix words’ with you. Thank you! π
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Thanks, Johnny, me too. Oh, don’t pull the typical “I’m just a man card. I miss all the hints.” I bet nothing gets by you. Far too smart for that, my friend. I appreciate the compliment. Very sweet of you. π Thank you!
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You would be surprised…and they make ‘cards’ for a reason. π Thank you just the same!
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Cards, indeed. π You’re welcome!
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Great poem guys! It reminded me a lot of David Guetta’s “She-Wolf” music video, which has inspired a poem or two of my own on wolves.
Also reminded me of this quote I’ve paired in the past with one of my wolf poems:
βTo run with the wolf was to run in the shadows, the dark ray of life, survival and instinct. A fierceness that was both proud and lonely, a tearing, a howling, a hunger and thirst. Blessed are they who hunger and thirst. A strength that would die fighting, kicking, screaming, that wouldnβt stop until the last breath had been wrung from its body. The will to take oneβs place in the world. To say βI am here.β To say βI am.’β
β O.R. Melling
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Thanks so much for saying so. I’m not familiar with the video, but I’m glad it sparked your memory. Awesome quote! Enjoy your weekend.
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There’s the line “My desire is to hear the song” … and this poem is a wonderful song you two have sung together.
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Oh, Gus, sometimes you take my breath away. Awesome line, I agree. Thanks so much! xx
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Beautiful that the comment took your breath away π
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Thank you and now you’ve made me blush. I’m off to read your posts soon. I’ve been MIA for a few winks. A busy week, but now I can read where your thoughts have been, which is always a highlight for my day.
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Hey, sometimes real life gets in the way of blogging and writing. Those damn day jobs π Thank you for saying my post are one of your highlights π
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Damn job… π You’re welcome. The truth, Gus… π
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I love what y’all came up with, Audrey! Who says poetry is a solitary endeavor?? You and Johnny have come up with something truly special — and I can only imagine what fun it was to collaborate on it! Another gorgeous flower, too!
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Hi, Debbie, thank you! I enjoyed writing with Johnny. Men have such a different perspective. Working with Johnny was seamless. Such a professional and a genuine creative soul. Thanks, the flower is tops, I agree. π Enjoy your weekend!
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