*shakes her head* You couldn’t wipe the smile from my face even if you wanted to, Photographer. Humbled. I think it’s pretty sad how I’m already missing you and you haven’t even left yet. Pitiful… π
You and your “tops”….who’d you pick that up from…someone in LA? *laughs* The clouds do look like wisps, one of my favorite words, maybe my favorite! Umm…what are you thinking about? These clouds couldn’t possibly have you thinking of wickedness.
Oh, for a beautiful day like that! Audrey, I NEED some sunshine — I tolerate the cold, but the dreariness is most off-putting. Guess I shouldn’t complain, though. I’m not shoveling like those poor folks out East, nor am I fretting over the power going out and freezing half to death!
I like the poem, reminds me of Blue October’s “Into The Ocean”. I noticed the pattern as well, 3 words per line, each line a little longer than the last. Nice form!
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What a great song, Ry. Your thought made me smile. Yes, well, sometimes I think before I write and sometimes I write before thinking. Glad you enjoyed this form. I sorta like the gradual line change. It looks pretty. I can be quite a girl, you see. π Thanks for reading.
Hmmm, I may borrow this photo ~ the feathers floating so freely against the blue…
Well done once again Audacious π
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You may have this photo, in fact, I insist. Take it, please…. Thank you, my Photographer Philosopher Extraordinaire. π You remembered! Aww!
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The Audacious feathered clouds ~ a perfect title for the photo!
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*shakes her head* You couldn’t wipe the smile from my face even if you wanted to, Photographer. Humbled. I think it’s pretty sad how I’m already missing you and you haven’t even left yet. Pitiful… π
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Excellently phrased, Audrey. Yes!
Big Hugs
jf
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Blush. You continue to build me up. Thank you ever so, jf. xx
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a lark, wisplike
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What an awesome compliment, Eric. Thank you. π
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Those clouds are tops. Just little wisps. They look sweet enough.
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You and your “tops”….who’d you pick that up from…someone in LA? *laughs* The clouds do look like wisps, one of my favorite words, maybe my favorite! Umm…what are you thinking about? These clouds couldn’t possibly have you thinking of wickedness.
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*laughs* I’m not sure! I said it before then. I think it’s one of my fav words. Tops. Just like yours is wisp! Have you ever read Ender’s Game?
Nah, not wickedness. Just thinking of the trip to LA, actually.
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Oh, just not to me then, I guess. Tis a cool expression. Tops. Wisp. Cool… No, I haven’t read it. Tis a boy book, I think. Should I?
Will you tell me about your trip? What has you thinking?
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Well, I suppose I use it widely. I think Mr. Warrior would like it. Oh, I don’t know. Tis up to you. You probably wouldn’t like it.
Just left me with lots to think on. Why does everything have to be complicated?
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I’ll try the expression on him and let you know if he picks it up. *smiles* Why did you ask me that, Duke? I want to know.
I wish I knew more so I could answer that question in the best way. I’m sorry…I hope it isn’t to complicated, but I bet it is. *frowns*
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*laughs* Okay, then! Well, ’cause I just read it, and I was curious if you had. That’s all.
Complication. You should write a poem about it.
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Oh. Pass the sugar, please. Really?
I did!! *sparks fly*
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What do you want the sugar for? Yes, really.
Cool!
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Grapefruit. Tis so sour… What is the book about, Duke? Did you like it?
*smiles*
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They are sour! It’s about training a commander to save mankind.
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Do you like them? I sorta do…but only if there’s sugar. Oh, yeah, tis a man’s book, for sure. Do you want to save mankind?
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I used to have them…I think I do! Nah, too hard!
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It would be way too hard, I agree. Imagine trying to get everyone in a line…
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I think I’d die from trying.
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Ever the couch potato. ..
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I’d like to be one…for a day, I think.
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When is blue more than blue? When Aud’s got it in her able hands, that’s when. π
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Aww, Chum. *blush* Thank you.. π
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This looks like my view over the Gulf. Has been there a couple of days. Nice poem.
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We’re fortunate, Butch. Thank you.. β‘
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So nice to see the sun.
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I agree. It was a long time comin’.
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Those clouds are like angel wings!
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I thought so, as well, Willow. π
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Could do with some of those blue skies myself right now! π
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I wish I could send them to you, my friend. I would bring them personally!! π I’m dying to drop everything and visit the UK.
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You so should come visit the UK! β€
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I know. I will and I’ll let you know when I do. β‘
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That would be so cool. I promise to show you all the UK has to offer! π
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Yay!! I’ll count on it. β‘
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Tarry a Shiver, I love that. because what does a shiver become when it tarries with you? π β€ β€ β€
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Thank you! Oooo, tell me, Morgan!!! β‘ Giggle. xxx
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Oh, for a beautiful day like that! Audrey, I NEED some sunshine — I tolerate the cold, but the dreariness is most off-putting. Guess I shouldn’t complain, though. I’m not shoveling like those poor folks out East, nor am I fretting over the power going out and freezing half to death!
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Debbie, you would love it here today. The sky hasn’t a cloud in it… I feel for the northerners right now. Ugh!!
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I like the poem, reminds me of Blue October’s “Into The Ocean”. I noticed the pattern as well, 3 words per line, each line a little longer than the last. Nice form!
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What a great song, Ry. Your thought made me smile. Yes, well, sometimes I think before I write and sometimes I write before thinking. Glad you enjoyed this form. I sorta like the gradual line change. It looks pretty. I can be quite a girl, you see. π Thanks for reading.
(I appreciate the heads up!)
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