Second chances
Chances she’s willing to take
Take her back, show her love
Love full of trust and guidance
Guidance you offered, intuitively
Intuitively, are the breaths taken
Taken, in the end without you
You are the right man for her
Her, being me, always
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
Very cool ~ I learned something new today, and read a great poem from my favorite poet in the process. Not a bad way to start the day (hey, that rhymed!). 🙂
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Thanks! I’m always happy to teach you something new, Dalo. Your favorite poet? Ever the flirt…seriously? It’s official, now I’m allowing you to lie to me, as well. Giggle. To think I’m Randall Collis’ favorite poet. Dreamy. Say it is so… 😉 (I knew you were a poet. Come on!)
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Hey, maybe I am a poet…I forgot that rhymed 🙂 And without a doubt, you are my favorite poet (hmmm, not sure I could name another but don’t let that bother you…ha, ha…actually I have a couple of Bukowski book in HK that I really like, but he is a far second to your work 🙂
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You are a poet. Don’t try to fool me, Mr. Poet And Didn’t Know It. 🙂 You made my day, thank you. ❤ (I'm gonna pretend that you know all poets, Sir. Don't burst my bubble.) Bukowski, I know him, a bit. I'll have to read up on what it is about his work that may inspire you. I couldn't possibly agree with you, but man, does it feel good to believe it. 😉
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I don’t know if I have done a loop poem before…
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You should do a loop poem, Joshua. You know how much I enjoy your poetry…
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Wild one here, Aud. Like a movie plot to me.
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A movie plot…interesting, Chum. Yes, you know, could be a movie. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Took me a minute to figure out what the “loop” was. 🙂
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You, Sir, get an A.
P.S. -What’s a loop? Or what’s the loop? 😉
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A really neat, skipping format… reminded me of skipping stones on the water. One ending is another beginning.
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Thank you! You’re right… It does seem a bit like rocks skipping, Gus. I love your thinking on this one. I also love trying to skip rocks. I sorta stink at it. Yes, indeed and I look forward to beginnings more so than endings.
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Ah, another one of these. 😀 Love it.
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Hi, Luke. Yes, loopy poems are fun. I’m a fan. 🙂 I’m so happy you loved this poem. You should try one, I think. *wonders if she’s already recommended this*
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Loopy poems… XD
Yes, I must try one. 🙂 Thanks for recommending it.
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Tee hee hee… I didn’t mean it that way, but now that you write it out… *rolls her eyes and swirls her head*
Yes, please do, Luke. You’re welcome, of course.
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I know you didn’t. 😀 *tries to imagine eye rolling and head swirling at same time* *looks ridiculous in front of computer trying to do so*
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*makes me laugh so much* You make me smile.
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Makes me smile to hear it. 🙂
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This is tops. Very nice. * thinks on it*
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Thank you, Duketh. I thought I’d try writing another loop poem. *wonders what he’s thinking on*
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Loop poems are nice. I’m thinking on the meaning.
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What are you thoughts, Duketh?
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Well, I know it’s an opportunity you wish you could have over again…?
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Or maybe take in another direction?
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Aha! So that means it can still be changed?
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No, I don’t believe so,
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Hmm… *wonders what happened*
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Probably has something to do with heartlessness, if that is a word.
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With the professor you mean?
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Are you the professor?
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Umm…yes…?
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*looks around* Okay. I was just wondering.
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Is this a new form you’ve created, Audrey, or am I just so ignorant of poetic forms in general that I’ve somehow missed seeing its like? Whatever, I love it! The circular nature, each line picking up the last word in the previous line, looping around its message — stunning!
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Oh, no, not new at all. Glad you learned of a new form. They’re fun to write and a great thinking exercise. You’re so sweet. Thank you…
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🙂 I love this, this is amazing, amazing and inspiring, inspiring me to write, write one of my own. : )
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Well your poem is lovely! I’m always thrilled to inspire you. You’re a poetess I so admire… xx
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My poem was a lark, but yours was lovely 🙂 As are You my Friend~
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However, I like nothing better than a lovely lark. ♡
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